View Full Version : Character: Lady in red

07 July 2003, 07:55 PM
My latest piece of work, 100% Photoshop, about 3 days.

Grinning Maniac
07 July 2003, 11:09 PM
The body looks good, but you need to improve on the face. It looks a little flat. The comes and lips come out and you but the other parts of the face seem pulled back.

Rei Ayanami
07 July 2003, 11:12 PM
LHS of the face (as we look) needs more polys! (jk) it needs to be smoother, esp for a flat face like that. and i see people with faces like that, its good i think.

07 July 2003, 11:53 PM
Update - see 1st post

07 July 2003, 03:25 AM
the nose is a bit flat.. but overall seems good ..

07 July 2003, 03:47 AM
I think the hair is taking away from the shape of her... If it was fluffier at the top, had more volume, it'd really bring out the shape of her head and make everything proportioned I think.

I absolutely love how you did the background, have you considered her lips to be as vibrant a red? :D

07 July 2003, 04:14 AM
Yeah I tried different tints of red (both dark and vibrant) for her lips but it didnt look very good, distracting...

As for her hair, I dont know, I wanted them to be flat and pointy so it's not easy to add some volume without a different haircut, maybe with some highlights/shadows/textures

07 July 2003, 07:15 AM
the mood is nice.....but somehow it seems that the hair doesn't belongs to her!! :)

12 December 2003, 10:54 PM
isn't she a bit too muscular? I mean her bust is way too bulky in reference with the head.
And maybe you should look into the lower part of the eye...looks too flat..maybe add some sort of thicker eyeliner?

so is this 3d or 2d? is it possible that you may have posted in the wrong category?

Carrot Juice
12 December 2003, 11:20 PM
I think what looks off about the hair is that it is not "tall" enough- the eyes should be about halfway up the head, and these are about 1/3 from the top!

Really nice composition, though. I love how you did the lips and flowers.

12 December 2003, 11:42 PM
I think the lips look great. Something about the eyes doesn't feel right.

12 December 2003, 01:17 AM
take away a little cheek and give the chin a little more "shape"~~~ nice work

12 December 2003, 03:08 PM
Good work, and great colors!!

I'd like to see more depth between the eyes. You can't really see where the back of the nose ends, and the eye-socket (if that's what it's called) begins...

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