View Full Version : 2D Still 4ngel

07-11-2003, 07:16 PM
ho folks,

iŽve never painted something on pc before,
i used photoshop and my wonderful microsoft mouse,
i know the showed work on cgtalk from the other artists is better than mine, but i think everybody started at a low level like mine.

so please give me some crits
next time iŽll do it better (hope so ;) )

au revoir

Rei Ayanami
07-11-2003, 07:52 PM

its too flat, give it some contrast, nothing is that flat, anywhere!

other than that, its a good start. keep going!

07-11-2003, 08:44 PM
And her hair is too blurry.

I like the details on her tatoos and feathers.

Good start anyway. :thumbsup:

07-11-2003, 09:05 PM
SHADOWS !! all right ;D

and the hair problem,
i will work on it
:rolleyes: thx for comments

07-11-2003, 09:16 PM
you have defined the edges too hard....... keep some soft and some dark so as to reflect the light and shade of shadows and the light direction

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