View Full Version : tuggin' on the old pantaloons...

04 April 2009, 05:22 AM
Hey all!

I've got a quick anim here I'm thinking of expanding upon, but before I go any further with it I'd like some uber critical feedback. I'm not sure what it is, but I'm not sold on it...

(just open/DL attachment: rnr_07_b.avi (

Thanks for your time

04 April 2009, 03:51 AM

Mr Burns says there's a shiny new donkey in it for you:D

04 April 2009, 04:22 AM
Hey, crisplet!

Good job so far. I'm guessing you plan to do more with this animation, so I only have a few things to critique:

1.) During the down position of each hop, except for the last, your character appears to only move in the up and down axis (e.g., frames 20-22, 29-31, and 38-41), when in fact, the momentum should continue moving in the direction he is hopping in, and...

2.) It would be nice to see more of this project animated, which may encourage more feedback.

Again, good work, and keep on at it!


04 April 2009, 07:56 PM
Thanks for your reply oddel!

Good eye, I totally missed that.

04 April 2009, 11:23 PM
No problem. Sometimes we can be so focused on one area, that we miss other areas that need to be addressed :)

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