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07 July 2003, 08:05 PM
Hi all!

Working on a little pic. It is in its final stages so critiques are very
welcome. Need to add a background aswell. Anyone got any ideas?


07 July 2003, 08:10 PM
beautiful work. As far as bg goes...some guy posted pix of an airport concept in the finished works section...ur girl would fit in nicely with some of his pics..just make sure u adjust the hue and tone of the overall comp.

07 July 2003, 08:16 PM
Personally, I would re-light her face with more emphasis on the eyes and mouth, and a strong rim light on the side of the headphones. I find her nose is too prominent right now.

07 July 2003, 09:26 PM
please read the forum rules.

you need a wire frame as well.

07 July 2003, 02:02 AM
along with the relighting, work with the highlights of the materials. she looks a bit like a mannequin right now.

07 July 2003, 09:28 PM

VERY nice work!!:applause:
Personally I like the lighting, it's very intimate..
Would like to see some more work on the phones thou, bring it more up to date, and maybe in another tone of color..
There's something odd about the mouth and where it intersects the lower cheek, but I can't really point out what.. Nothing that needs remaking anyway:)


07 July 2003, 10:07 PM
awsome but rules demand a wire and I want a wire!:thumbsup:

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