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07 July 2003, 03:27 PM
Divx video codes (Free)

avi download (Divx video)
Right click on the link and use save target as
compressed avi download in rar format (, or
avi download ( female monster front view monster top view monster views

Thanks for critiques~ :thumbsup:

Feel free to email me

07 July 2003, 04:26 PM
It would seem to be a dead link.

07 July 2003, 07:14 PM
Hey looking pretty good; still not sure about those face shapes and a few of the cuts are a bit quick, but I am more of a fade transition guy, hehehe.

The face on your creature on the end still with the different colour looks really cool too.

07 July 2003, 06:54 PM
Hey koity,
You have some great models there, and I like that set, but you really NEED to cut that better... I think Matthewma's transistions would really help. Also, think about doing a more standard rotation for each character. As it is now, the background moving back and forth is a bit dizzying. I think when you show your wireframe of the montser your compositing might be slightly off. The wireframe doesnt seem to be lined up with the rendered image. The bump map for the set, at least on the floor, is too extreme. If you have time, try displacement.

well thats it for now, I hope I helped you make your reel even better :)

07 July 2003, 11:34 PM
Thanks for the critiques, Those advices are very useful~!:thumbsup:
I will fix them and upload a new one soon.
I didn't realize I nearly trash my demo reel with awful editing skills. :thumbsdow

Copy and paste
07 July 2003, 05:31 AM
like the alien character and the gal is fine too but i do see a weird pop on the hand while the rotation goes and i would surely suggest you to change the facial expressions...a pop there too...the facial expression cud b better.

07 July 2003, 01:12 AM
Wow, it's pretty good :buttrock:
i wonder why others haven't comment on this before,

nice works :applause:

07 July 2003, 03:13 AM
no bad

good job


07 July 2003, 09:25 AM

I thought your reel was quite nice, the girl is very well done. Although like some the comments already made, there are a couple of places I think you could work on.

as mentioned - the spinny background doesn't help at all. If anything - it detracts from your monster model - as is, It's hard to tell what is going on with it and (you do need to keep the models on screen a bit longer and not too spinny/quick) cause I think the viewer can't focus.

I also felt its a bit wasted that you didn't have a scene with the two characters interacting.

that's it for now - I don't have access to your video on the laptop. More maybe later. All the best!!

cya round.

elfling bard
07 July 2003, 08:03 PM
Hi Koity, This is an impressive reel...I wonder if there a way to contact you. You don't have any contact link on your website or maybe i've "myst" it... Anyway i'd like to present you a project i'm involve in.

God bless


07 July 2003, 09:45 PM
Say Hi to Magic and Yoav for me.

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