View Full Version : DWIV - 3D - Xidon -cyborg -Scourge of War
03 March 2009, 06:20 AM
Look at my latest post for a description.
Hey everyone, There are some mint entries already online I'm very excited.
I have chosen to do a cyborg for my Dominance War IV entry.
The Scourge or War is a cyborg about 3 times the size of an average adult human. Its main power source comes from the two human torsos kept on its back. These bodies are kept unconscious and feed full of nutrients to keep them alive and full of energy. The CPU sucks energy out of the living power source to fuel it in battle. When it needs a huge burst of energy two generators per capsule start to spin at an alarming rate sucking almost all the life out of its living hosts so get the boost of energy it need. the antenna on its back acts for communication as well as another power source. They attract lightening and store up energy in its body when struck by lightening.
I still haven't thought of its weapons yet. Maybe a gun arm some massive weapon. Maybe even deviating hands of some kind. What do you guys think?
Please feel free to critique.
03 March 2009, 06:47 AM
Sweet design, cant wait to see more. :beer:
03 March 2009, 10:59 PM
Looks great man. It looks like it has potential to be far greater than your rat :)
03 March 2009, 04:39 AM
Cool idea will be cool to see it come together :beer:
03 March 2009, 05:42 AM
Love the concept.. especially the spinning capsules would be a cool thing to visualise it when in attack mode, Nice Design too.. looking forward for updates
03 March 2009, 06:35 AM
Yeah waiting to see what these look like after a bit more dev. good idea, keep it up :buttrock:
03 March 2009, 09:09 PM
Looking great man, loving the smooth curves/sharp edge balance.
03 March 2009, 09:31 AM
Hey here is an update. i changed the design quite a bit. He is now more fleshy and I'm working on putting in the mechanical parts. He also has two giant laser cannons in each palm of his hand. Hope you guys like. Please feel free to critique.
03 March 2009, 10:09 AM
I like the giant hands, it reminds me of a caveman :), i also like how you have the robotic muscles, this could look quite good on the huge hands keep it comming mate
03 March 2009, 12:44 AM
Cool man, I'm liking the new direction.
Reminds me of the crysis suit, which rocks :buttrock:
Would be keen to see some development on the head(face?)
04 April 2009, 08:16 AM
Reminds me of a giant gorilla/frankenstein
Looking great, so lets see some progression!
04 April 2009, 12:54 PM
Looks good so far. I'm going to keep a watch for this one..
04 April 2009, 11:10 AM
Hey all, its been a long time since i've posted anything and I still Haven;t come too much further either. Here is an update on the design. I hope to finish it tomorrow. I've gone less for robotic muscles in the arms, and now have exhaust type pipes coming out of his muscles to release the heat and excess energy from firing his hand cannons. I've developed the capsules a bit more (as you can see far right). And am now just deciding on what to do for the legs and chest area. Please critique on the legs you like, and/or ideas you think could work well as I'm a bit stuck on my design at the moment:banghead:
04 April 2009, 11:30 AM
Looking really gud, lovin the arms.
As for legs I would choose the top right one's
Keep it up! :thumbsup:
04 April 2009, 12:41 PM
Not bad, but it really reminds me this...
04 April 2009, 04:51 AM
sweet I really like the shape of its head! :D
04 April 2009, 10:01 AM
Great concepting mate :) i think the face could use a little more details, i love the whole exhaust idea. as for the legs i like the bottom ones but um still undecided about the feet as i dont like the top right ones as they look too close to human shoes (mechanical version), but i think putting the top left ones with the bottom legs could make it look like robot pants:p, but keep it up man cant wait to see the final design
04 April 2009, 11:24 AM
Hi Benjamin, Thanks for replying to my post in the general discussion thread. I think there might be another reason though, cause I live in Europe and I usually try to post comments on other threads considering to East/West times. However as I said thanks a lot for posting.
About your design, I think the idea of the torsos in the back is really cool! I would play a little bit more with the silhouette of the character, may be you could find some more nice forms.
BTW, I loved your Predator VS Alien illustration. Really great!!!
04 April 2009, 10:05 PM
looking very nice man, I've just got the feeling his back looks stretched out in order to fit 2 on his back? It only looks aparent in the isomectic shot in your last sketch post. The front + side views look natural tho.
Apart from that everything looks mint! Keep it up. :-)
04 April 2009, 10:09 PM
Hey the design is looking good. Keep it up.
04 April 2009, 10:16 PM
Thanks all for you comments.
Spartistic- Yea I wanted the head plain like this as it is not the main focus. The arms and his cannons are the main focus. I will detail the head up with war damage.
MrRico- No problem, glad I could help.
Darkra - Yea I really want two but I will take into consideration size when I'm building it in 3D.
I'm finally in Modo so will hopefully have an update on later today or tomorrow with a WIP of the Capsule.
04 April 2009, 06:20 AM
Ha ha finally some 3D for you all. Hope you like where its heading. I'm going to play with the scale of the chick. Also i will be putting a head piece on her that 'plugs' her into the cyborg body. Then I'll start on the rest of the body. Hopefully some Zbrushing this week. :arteest:
04 April 2009, 06:26 AM
looking good man loving the detailing of the pipes, espectially the support spiraling round. keep it up man it going good:thumbsup:
04 April 2009, 08:33 AM
Nice one man, good to see yo are onto the 3D. More updates :D
04 April 2009, 12:21 AM
looking great so far. good progress! :thumbsup:
I am guessing the chick inside will be edited more to look like ur concept drawings? (terrified opened jaw etc?)
04 April 2009, 12:25 AM
Ha indeed my friend, you are correct :applause:
04 April 2009, 11:00 AM
I like the new concept with the big creature and the multihose muscles. The bodypods will need to be in torment I think. Look forward to updates
04 April 2009, 03:19 AM
Hey all. I have updated my girl and roughed out the shape and proportions of the main cyborg.
04 April 2009, 04:18 AM
Nice proportions, good to see the whole thing together! :beer:
04 April 2009, 03:43 PM
I managed to get some time today to rough out my base of my body mesh to take into Znrush. I just need to build the pipes to sculpt the flesh around :arteest:
04 April 2009, 03:30 AM
Looking gud man, great to see it coming along. :bounce:
keep it up.
04 April 2009, 04:55 PM
Sweet i've been developing the neck area a bit more. I will be fattening up the wires that run along the big cabling in his neck. I have his shoulder coming out over the pipes so it is ready to take into Zbrush to start sculpting the shape of the pipes back into them. Its 5am here so I think ill hit the sack now for some Zzzzz.
04 April 2009, 09:37 AM
Hey, design is looking awesome and what you've got so far is looking great. Look foward to seeing the detail you get in zbrush
Keep up the good work
04 April 2009, 10:00 AM
looking great mate, loving the pipes and tubes, especially the wires around the pipes cant wait to see detail like that all over :bounce:, keep it up
04 April 2009, 11:11 PM
Hey guys. I haven't been on here for a while as busy busy Zbrushing. So my high poly is almost complete. I had an idea of having this spear through him to make him more interesting, but I think i'll save on the UV space and ditch the idea. I've added the aerials on his back. And now just have to make his legs and head.
Hope you like, and as always please leave critiques and thoughts.
So much work to do with so little time. :banghead:
04 April 2009, 11:16 PM
Hey bro, love the hands! They sort of creep me out in a good way. Keep up the good work.
04 April 2009, 03:23 PM
Hey thanks dude, I really enjoyed working on the hands. Maybe i'll do some anatomy sculpts later on after D War. Just finishing up the legs now. Hopefully will finish them tonight:) Then start on the low poly tomorrow. :buttrock:
04 April 2009, 08:50 PM
Hey this is looking pritty sweet. I know what you mean about time as well to, going to be a bit of push to get it all done on time.
Keep up the good work though. Loving it!!!
05 May 2009, 10:50 PM
wow dude, coming along very nicely!!
Love the intergration of the damaged tissue with the pipes etc on the arms.
05 May 2009, 12:45 AM
looking great mate :thumbsup:, kkep it up i was wondering if you were going to use the same ripped flesh look around the antenna and the neck? just in idea... But all is good and i will look forward to seeing your low poly and legs.
05 May 2009, 09:51 AM
Darkra - Thanks dude. much appreciated.
SPartistic - The flesh you speak of is actually burnt flesh from the pipes getting too hot when firing his hand cannons.. I will attend to the other areas mentioned soon.
05 May 2009, 12:21 AM
Here is an update for you all. The legs are pretty much done and I have added some subtle veins to the arms. Started on a displacement for the face mask, please critique as pretty stuck on the idea for the mask, its very much a WIP. Low poly now :argh: so i best crack onto that.
05 May 2009, 02:09 AM
Nice one bro, it's come together quite well.
Legs could use a bit more texture, but I am sure you can take care of that in the texturing.
Time to crank out that low poly :D
05 May 2009, 02:33 AM
Aha low poly almost done. Just have to make the cannons in his hands and some planes for smoke effects, and then I'm done.
05 May 2009, 02:27 AM
whoa, I love the skin..it looks so, um, real, and frosty...:D! Great work!
05 May 2009, 03:50 AM
man looking great, love the legs with there simplicity, ti works wel with the overall look :), the low poly looks really good as well. keep it up, will be nice to see what colours you choose to go with
05 May 2009, 01:19 AM
NavigatorJones - Thanks. Um it only looks like this cause of the global illumination I have in my renders and a blue toned image for my HDRI. The model just has a default shader over the whole thing, except the next and the glass.
Spartistic - Thanks heaps dude. i've been worrying heaps about the plainness of the legs, but cant seem to think of anything to add which fits, so I think i'll leave them like this.
05 May 2009, 04:32 AM
Hey just started baking some my normals so here is an untweeked quick render of my body with Normal/colour/occlusion. I know it still has dirty dirty seams but im just keeping you guy up with the play on my progress.
05 May 2009, 04:49 AM
Hey mate, looking good for a rough. May want to check out the zigzags on the surface of the hands, could be a normals problem, otherwise keep up the good work! _b
05 May 2009, 03:08 PM
Hey just another update. Busy busy at work so hopefully that wont stop me from reaching the deadline. Just rendered the normals for the hand cannon and neck, an the colour for the neck too.
05 May 2009, 09:07 PM
Choice bro, Id say get onto those textures now, only a few days left and it takes longer than you think ;)
05 May 2009, 03:35 AM
Just starting to put everything together. I have to get all the textures done today :arteest: I'm still not too sure about the body colour. What do you guys reckon?
05 May 2009, 06:38 AM
Yeah good start. Might want to brighten the face mask up a bit unless its going to be quite shiney.
05 May 2009, 03:36 AM
Hey here is my Pose and some sort of base. Not sure what i'm doing for my base as of yet. This is a place holder but could end up close to the final.
05 May 2009, 03:40 AM
Pose is great mate, really suits the character :) i cant help thinking hes going up to someone and grabbing thier whole head in one massive hand then blowing it to bits :)
05 May 2009, 06:08 AM
Great to see it coming along. looking good.
Grunge it up a bit and you should be there. I agree with Untamed about brightening the face.
05 May 2009, 09:59 AM
Hey all. Man last night was insane trying to do all the texturing and renders ready to hand in. Here is the final. Hope you all like it and please feel free to critique it as I would still like feed back. I'd like to say thanks to everyone that helped me out with this :beer: , especially Verasl and Untamed. A very big thanks to my girlfriend who has been very understanding of all the time I've spent doing this project.
05 May 2009, 10:11 AM
Well id just like to say wow :bowdown:, i have been watching your posts from the start. You have increasingly improved and developed this. The final looks really great, one of your better works i'd have to say :thumbsup:, so keep up the good work and i look forward to see more where that came from.
I missed this one. Looks like the normal map is not rendering very well, but the character still looks badass and really entertaining :)
Congrats on finishing!
05 May 2009, 10:42 PM
Thanks dude. Yea i know there are a lot of seams around. I was so far behind for ages, and had to cram all the texturing in in the last day or two.
05 May 2009, 11:15 PM
well done man! those final touches with the textures really polished it off. The extra flesh details and grunge was exactly what it needed. great job! ;)
Best work so far! .....apart from ur predator of course :)
05 May 2009, 03:15 AM
Yeah congrats on finishing man. Bit of a shame you had to rush at the end, but it came out quite well regardless. Good luck for the judging!
We should have some celebratory drinks or something :beer:
05 May 2009, 03:15 AM
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