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adib
03 March 2009, 09:12 AM
Hi,everyone

This is the first time on DM,and I m very happy to be part from CGSociety team.Good luck everyone!

update of a Demon Lord.

Comments and critics are welcome!

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9261/newpresentationwip.jpg

ROBOTTANK
03 March 2009, 09:42 AM
Hell yeah, great start, I like the standing pose concept, although this creature doesn't seem as a leader (Demon Lord), he actually seems just below a master (taking orders). In a sense, seems a bit frail, but great concept overall.

NavigatorJones
03 March 2009, 09:48 AM
Very nice! I like how sinewy he looks, but on the other hand ROBOTTANK has a point, he prob needs to be beefed up a bit more to look more like a Demon Lord :D

VonMarsch
03 March 2009, 10:05 AM
Nice concept work but be careful with that standing pose because rules say: "Demon Lords are larger than 20x20x20 feet and do not possess any human characteristics."

adib
03 March 2009, 10:19 AM
Thanks guys! Very helpful! Here is an update,what do you think?
Best to you all!

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/354/demon002.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 11:14 AM
Another update.Hope you liked!:buttrock:

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5213/demon004.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 12:50 PM
update-pose:)



http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9869/demon005.jpg

NavigatorJones
03 March 2009, 01:38 PM
Ohh yeah I like how it rears up like that in the 4th pic!

adib
03 March 2009, 01:52 PM
Concept composition:buttrock:

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/915/demon006.jpg

nellement
03 March 2009, 02:10 PM
Hey,nice start,would be better to try to make him more stable and stronger stance,right now he looks a lil weak at the legs area

Temporal
03 March 2009, 02:21 PM
Looking cool so far! I think it'd be nice to see some kind of additional adornment on the tentacles, or to have some additional element to them besides just the sticks . . . which are by themselves still pretty awesome

adib
03 March 2009, 02:56 PM
Hey,nice start,would be better to try to make him more stable and stronger stance,right now he looks a lil weak at the legs area


Looking cool so far! I think it'd be nice to see some kind of additional adornment on the tentacles, or to have some additional element to them besides just the sticks . . . which are by themselves still pretty awesome


Im thinking right now to see what I will improuve my model,but also I must think of my polygons.

Thanks guys!GO CGSociety team!:buttrock:

GaeasHerald
03 March 2009, 05:30 PM
Cool start Adib. It's good that you got rid of the human features it had in the first sketch, but I think you could go a bit further and make it less conventional. Jazz it up with some unusual placing of the wings/legs/head...

Anyway, great sketches and have a lot of fun!

MartinNielsen
03 March 2009, 11:05 PM
Nice drawings :thumbsup: I agree with GaeasHerald. It could use some deformations. Good luck :)

adib
03 March 2009, 05:13 AM
Thanks guys! More update soon.:bounce:

Ferx
03 March 2009, 06:12 AM
Hey Adrian,

Really cool sketches! :D Really nice color for your demon. Im agree with Gerardo. Maybe you can try some sketches with a more masive body, like a rino :) only a comment. Good luck and waiting for more updates! Cheers mate! :beer:

adib
03 March 2009, 02:43 PM
Thanks Ferx! I work rigth now on,to make him more impresive!:thumbsup:

SebastianWunnicke
03 March 2009, 04:29 PM
cool concept, his floating tentacle legs are great, perhaps you should define the knee area a bit more. An interessting start.

adib
03 March 2009, 05:48 PM
Hi,

another update,with stronger arms...

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/401/demon007.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 04:45 AM
Update,modeling...


http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/161/demon008.jpg

syrez-one
03 March 2009, 09:49 AM
hello adrian, fast as ever nice your already in production :)

the stronger arms definitly support the whole body alot better! the colors really make it your style already :)

looking forward!! keep it up!

adib
03 March 2009, 04:52 AM
Thanks SebastianWunnicke and syrez-one ! Another wip...



http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6339/demon009.jpg

Ferx
03 March 2009, 04:57 AM
Hey Adrian,

The head modeling is looking really good :D Like the new arms for your concept!
Waiting for more updates! Cheers!! :beer:

adib
03 March 2009, 12:07 PM
Thanks Ferx! Here is a new update.Is just a scketch in Zbrush.First I will add more edges because right now I have only 5000 triangles,and after I will start to make details for normal map.


http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1521/demon010.jpg

ersinerturk
03 March 2009, 12:22 PM
it's great so far. ugly and scary as it should be as a demon.
regards

adib
03 March 2009, 03:42 PM
Thanks ersinerturk! Here is update...


http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1248/demon011.jpg

MartinNielsen
03 March 2009, 08:14 AM
Nice surface. That helped a lot :)

OKMER
03 March 2009, 08:55 AM
yeah great start man!
just that his toes dont seem very handy.
Keep m coming!

namnocilis
03 March 2009, 08:57 AM
Are you really gonna go with those details further on the last update..? i couldn't really understand whats happening there, those are just details.. i liked your concept sketch and the maya basemesh.. but zbrush details is not happening, you need to spend time on those details refining it and give it more sense.. Waiting for the updates

adib
03 March 2009, 09:14 AM
Nice surface. That helped a lot :)

thanks,I work on!

yeah great start man!
just that his toes dont seem very handy.
Keep m coming!

Right now was just a detail test.I will work on the lowpoly geometry and redu the UV and after I work on details more.Thanks OKMER!

Are you really gonna go with those details further on the last update..? i couldn't really understand whats happening there, those are just details.. i liked your concept sketch and the maya basemesh.. but zbrush details is not happening, you need to spend time on those details refining it and give it more sense.. Waiting for the updates

Yes I know.On my next update you will see the difference.

Best to you guys!

adib
03 March 2009, 04:55 AM
working on details...





http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9956/demon017.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 04:58 AM
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3169/demon013.jpg
After I made some test on detail,I decide it to change the shape a little,so here it is:

adib
03 March 2009, 12:49 PM
update...


http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9326/demon014.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 07:56 PM
Working on texture...


http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1684/demon015.jpg

adib
03 March 2009, 10:59 AM
Hi,guys I really need your opinion about my progress.:wip:

adib
04 April 2009, 06:16 AM
Update...


http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5932/demon016.jpg

adib
04 April 2009, 05:32 AM
Changing the shape a little and the texture...


http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9956/demon017.jpg

adib
04 April 2009, 11:21 AM
I almost done with the model and texture,now I will start to make a strong pose.
Update...
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6442/demon018.jpg

DarkBlueArt
04 April 2009, 11:31 AM
Hello

I think the texture looks okay, but in my eyes there are several issues to fix. The texture looks a bit blurry, and there is a lack of sharp edges or different colours. It looks a bit cloudy and mushy. I would add some tones of black into the texture.
The wings looks good, i like the transparent-effect, but you can see where the alpha-map ends, i would fade it out more.
The big claws could get more details.

Keep on working.

so long

adib
04 April 2009, 12:41 PM
Thanks for your advise DarkBlueArt! Here is an update...

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3460/demon019.jpg

adib
05 May 2009, 09:13 PM
Hi guys,there is sometime I didn t update so here it is some of my presentation shots.Please feel free to crit! GO CGSOCIETY TEAM!

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5518/presentationwip.jpg

adib
05 May 2009, 07:47 AM
my final:

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9261/newpresentationwip.jpg

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