I'm starting work on a new personal shot and would very much like to hear your thoughts. It's in the rough blocking stage right now, so as I move on, I would like to hear what may or may not be working. If there's something you think I could do better, please lemme know what I can do, but also PLEASE lemme know WHY it would be better as well. I find that it helps me a great deal to know WHY something's not working and not just that it's wrong. Thanks for you time.
PS - Something that may be missed is that on frame 368, the masked man is reaching to snatch the cigarette that the girl is holding in her hand. Still working on that!! http://www.11secondclub.com/forum/img/smilies/smile.png
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