Lost Adventurer, Aleks Kirilenko (3D)
LC #42 Pipers Alley

View Full Version : :: Animation - Runaway Soldier ::

06-29-2003, 09:34 AM
Hi all, here's a short animation we did at last sem (sem3) for our 3d animation assignment...:)

- Detail -
Sofitimage XSI 3.01
GroupProject ( 3 person )
Divx 5.05 format

We just want feedbacks and critics on our animation so we can improve on anyway we can...:thumbsup:
:: thanx :: waiting for ur c&c .....

Mirror #01 (http://www.angelfire.com/magic/edmundw/3d/runaway_soldier.avi)
Mirror #02 (http://www.angelfire.com/magic/edmundw.geo/runaway_soldier.avi)
Mirror #03 (http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/wmc/runaway_soldier.avi)
Mirror #04 (http://www.geocities.com/magic/edmundw.geo/3d/runaway_soldier.avi)

06-29-2003, 10:49 AM
Very funny. nice style.
The characters maybe need more the skin to look like clay. Then the would fit perfect in the scenes.

And some sounds would be nice.

06-29-2003, 11:15 AM
your account has maxed out / been suspended. Which I gather to mean that people have downloaded and watched it. Where's the love and feedback?

Can't watch it but I would love to :'(

06-29-2003, 03:11 PM
Suspended?! eh....i will solve it as fast as posible...sorry sorry

TheGreenGiant: sorry, i will try to post other link.....

06-29-2003, 05:32 PM
Sorry for the maxed out account... I'm currently using free server so it will run out of bandwidth easily unless someone is kind enuf to provide me with mirrors... Here are 3 new mirrors...

mirror #1 (http://www.angelfire.com/magic/edmundw.geo/runaway_soldier.avi)
mirror #2 (http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/wmc/runaway_soldier.avi)
mirror #3 (http://www.geocities.com/edmundw.geo/3d/runaway_soldier.avi)

Anyway, I was hoping for comments on the animation... Also, can anyone suggest me a music to go with the animation?? As for sound effects, I wonder if anyone knows where I can download them for free?? :D


I animate
06-29-2003, 05:37 PM
wish I could see it but even the mirror sites won't show it.

06-29-2003, 06:01 PM
Ill host it for ya. Email me at johnz@invasionhosting.com

06-29-2003, 06:17 PM
Damn, cant get the mirrors to work properly... Just in case some of you might not be able to view it because of the free mirrors I'm using, I've attached a picture of it



06-29-2003, 07:43 PM
HAHAH WOW!! i love the style and the animation.....but no sound??? or is it just me..:shrug:

06-30-2003, 07:22 AM
Just wan to make sure did all the miror work?! or still suspended?!

Warhawk24: thanks for provided the host..

06-30-2003, 08:41 AM
I LOVED IT! 5 Thumbs up or whatever! 2 Stars! Bravicimo!

very funny, just wish there were sounds...I loved the look of the characters and actually would keep it looking like clay, like a Claymation...

06-30-2003, 09:21 AM
awsome, great work!, thats a unique style, i love how everything in the sky is attached to something, truly awsome

well done and keep it up ::):beer:

07-01-2003, 01:47 AM
Thanks for the comment... We do know that sound does make a lot of difference but we have no idea on how to create them... Wonder if anyone is kind enuf to help us on this?? hehe... just kidding... :D Hoping to get more c&c for our project...

07-01-2003, 11:20 AM
Wahh..............i hate u!!!!!

how can u do like that.......????No concious....

07-01-2003, 11:21 AM
woow!!!great work!!!cool!!I like the style.....If hav sound will be awesome work..!!:applause: :applause: :applause: :

07-01-2003, 11:52 AM
Love the look of the scenery. The characters themselves look too 'cg' though, would be nice to see them more stylized, and integrated better with the background. The animation is a little sketchy, I hope you don't mind me being super-critical here, it's a little jerky in places, and for example when the characters run into the bush and then out it doesn't read very well. A scene near the beginning to show the captured soldier would help with the rest of the story - tied up perhaps? And the timing of the editing needs some work... Overall though a very appealing piece, well done!

07-01-2003, 12:13 PM
Realy nice style.
It's great to see people using uncommpon styles. :thumbsup:

As mentioned before, the environment is looking great, the characters a bit too CG.

07-01-2003, 12:41 PM
What a great style! Really refreshing! :beer: I wonder if you could get some kids to narrate over the top, to accentuate the look of the animation? Like:

"A man was tied..." "Soldier" "Yeah, a slodyer was tied up and this nasty man wouldn't let him go...so the slodyer had to run away but the nasty man saw him and ran to catch him again...and then they jumped behind this bush, and then there was this big ROAR! *get the kids to scream here* So they had to run away, but they fell off a cliff, and the soldier grabbed a bit of tree that was sticking out of the cliff and he saved them and they made up and they were friends forever!"

07-02-2003, 10:14 AM
Thanks for all the comment and we really appreaciate it..:thumbsup:

mattmos: Yup, we agree that te animation is a little bit sketchy...and the editing problem that u mention we re already knew that,just dunno how to cut is better (any idea?! ) haha

BladeFX: Hmm...too cg...how bout create it more to clay!?

Max Particle: Good suggestion, if we redo or add in maybe will take it as a referrence....thanks

p/s: maybe i will trying to do some "behing the scene" of the charater...then we improve it again...:applause: thanks

07-02-2003, 12:14 PM
lol cool:thumbsup:

great style!

07-03-2003, 02:11 PM
It's good to hear that you all like the animation...:beer: Anyway, I was hoping for more c&c on how to improve the animation... Can anyone help me on this?? :D

Edmund Wong

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