06 June 2003, 01:59 AM
Hey.. that's a very ambitious piece.. nice idea but goes to show that Brazil cannot help bad lighting..
The main problem I am havign is that it's an intriguing image because of the content but there is a lot of detail an dbasically very flat lighting so that there is no seperation between the foreground and the background.
Lessent he lighting in the bacground so that ther eis more focus on the subject at hand.. it will create more drama an dsimple look better.. this image is visually confusing at the moment.. it;s the CG equivalent of "horror vacui" or in other words the fear of any vacant space.. your composition needs some breathing room which could be easily done with more dramatic lighting.. I think this image would be even more interesting if they were just in a white room.
01 January 2006, 12:00 PM
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