View Full Version : Massive Alien!, Jonas (3D)

06-15-2003, 05:49 PM (

Hello everyone!

Character created for a personal short film project.

Made using 3dsMax.
Textures made with photoshop.

Any critiques?


06-15-2003, 05:51 PM
not working mate!!

06-15-2003, 06:15 PM
Try now!


06-15-2003, 06:21 PM
His legs look a little too human or something, but really nothing I can say. Good job dude! :applause:

06-15-2003, 06:28 PM
Now he has "character" very well done, love everything about it, makes me wonder what kinda short this will be ;) BTW haven't seen you since the PA CHallenge, how've you been? Did you get a chance to enter that pic we all love so much to Expose?


06-15-2003, 06:34 PM
hope we get to see the short :buttrock:

06-15-2003, 06:34 PM
wonderful piece, no critques at all. Front page material :thumbsup:

06-15-2003, 06:35 PM
that's what i call a truble maker ,, :thumbsup:


06-15-2003, 06:36 PM
Great character, looks awesom. :)

He has a very weird face. Hmm, looks good though. :thumbsup:

I love the texturing too.

Im looking forward to the short film, hope all goes well for you.

Thx, keep up the great work.

06-15-2003, 06:36 PM
haven't seen you since the PA CHallenge, how've you been? Did you get a chance to enter that pic we all love so much to Expose?

Hello Lildragon!

I've been really busy changing jobs and moving to England...
But I'm back now!
Sadly I haven't sent my PA picture to Expose... I'll buy that book though, seems great!


06-15-2003, 06:38 PM
Can't wait to see this film project. The character looks great! Love the hands and feet.

06-15-2003, 06:40 PM
That's really awesome, but the only crit I can say is the shoulders have some minor problems, anatomically (human!) it's not correct(read 'perfect') ...but he's an alien! ;)

06-15-2003, 06:41 PM
Originally posted by Jonas
Hello Lildragon!

I've been really busy changing jobs and moving to England...
But I'm back now!
Sadly I haven't sent my PA picture to Expose... I'll buy that book though, seems great!


Ah bugger, well it's good you're back and still kicking a$$ with your work, you can still however enter your images (including this one) to the next Expose. Great work man, you probably already noticed you're plugged ;)


06-15-2003, 06:42 PM
enviable skill!

06-15-2003, 06:50 PM
Brilliant image , love everything about it.

ps: I tried to visit your site but I got a dead link ...

06-15-2003, 06:53 PM
nice overall feel of this render...nice texturing and character too...
but what I really like about this are his arms resting on that bar...can't imagine it's easy to visualize really looks like his arms are tensed...
well done!

06-15-2003, 06:54 PM
Really awesome work! Design, Modeling, Lightning and Texturing- everything is damn sophisticated! Keep it up man, I'm looking forward to seeing this short! :airguitar


06-15-2003, 06:59 PM
awesome character design and texturing/lighting :applause:
what modeling style do you use ?

06-15-2003, 07:01 PM
Tis is a breathtaking image. The textures and shading are superb, and the character design and positioning is topnotch.

This is reminiscent of Brom, my favorite fantasy artist.

06-15-2003, 07:10 PM
reminds me of Pascal Blanche... and i love his work :buttrock:

06-15-2003, 07:16 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

06-15-2003, 07:34 PM
Originally posted by Berserker
reminds me of Pascal Blanche... and i love his work :buttrock:

My thoughts also, v. nice image, just gotta love coloured shadows...

Maybe his head's a little too small IMHO or maybe the body too large ?!?!?!

06-15-2003, 07:36 PM
nice pic....rather than blowing sunshine up yer butt, ill give u some crit....
try experimenting with his proportions to break the human look,
slap on some lattices and stretch the legs or arms out or somethin.....

cheers, :thumbsup:

Silver Sliver
06-15-2003, 07:37 PM
Amazing! Five star for con concept and modeling :applause:

06-15-2003, 07:44 PM
awesome, he looks kick ass:thumbsup:

06-15-2003, 07:55 PM
I like the image. My first impression when I saw it was a teenage alien, on summer break from school waiting for his friends to come by and hang out. Then again, it could be a lack of sleep and working midnight to 8am.

Anyhoo... I think the whole image is impressive. good job.


06-15-2003, 08:18 PM
Looks like something out of Dark Sun - very nice........

06-15-2003, 09:02 PM
:beer: :beer: :applause: :applause:

really too hot ...some "new ways' of the ninja trip !!! cool

06-15-2003, 09:04 PM
Great work!

I know it may sound silly asking about such a small aspect of such an amazing work, but how did you achieve that wall texture? I love it!

06-15-2003, 09:15 PM
Exceptional artwork. The pose is great.:D

06-15-2003, 09:47 PM
awesome stuff dude. apart from most other fictional characters, this one looks like it could actually exist, except for the eyes being too much on the side, it would be very unpractical if he was to engage in battle (cause he looks like a fighter). anyways. good job man, i know i would not be able to make something like this

06-15-2003, 09:51 PM
Very very cool indeed. Love it.

06-15-2003, 09:54 PM
;) great man!

06-15-2003, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by Soulstorm
except for the eyes being too much on the side, it would be very unpractical if he was to engage in battle (cause he looks like a fighter:

Yeahh that's a great point.. all preditor animals have their eyes in the center of the face. Else they wouldnt be able to calc. distance.

Well As said in the posts before me... Great job man really organic :bounce:
06-15-2003, 10:36 PM
way kuul.. :wavey: ;)

mm... short film project.. looks like alot of work in that quality..

06-15-2003, 10:52 PM
:bounce: :bounce: :bowdown: :banghead: so good!!!!!!!!!!!

06-15-2003, 10:58 PM
man, dudes just chillin aint he?

wonderful work man :-). i especially like the way his head is tilting up into the sun just soakin it all in

great piece cant wait to see more with this character :-)

06-15-2003, 11:29 PM
is one of his pant legs supposed to be longer than the other? his left one seems a LOT longer since it goes past the knee and the leg is also bent

06-15-2003, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by McSpirit
Yeahh that's a great point.. all preditor animals have their eyes in the center of the face. Else they wouldnt be able to calc. distance.

Well As said in the posts before me... Great job man really organic :bounce:
Hum, eagles, sharks ? :P

Anyway, really nice pic, I love the pose, really readable, good mood !

Just the shoulder that looks a bit strange, except that, first class work ! :thumbsup:

06-15-2003, 11:54 PM
Your work is very excellent.That light feels very attractive sense of vision.

06-16-2003, 12:00 AM
Nice!! good to see that you are still kicking it! Drop me an e-mail and tell me what's going on dude!


.stefan andersson

06-16-2003, 12:13 AM
Originally posted by Carbon
His legs look a little too human

Wow, you only have 3 toes??? :D

Great job though I have to say that the shoulders are really a bit odd. But hey, it´s an alien and anatomy might vary, so great work. This guy really has character!:buttrock:

06-16-2003, 12:29 AM
Looks like this guy can really kick some arse....not crits from me.

06-16-2003, 01:15 AM

This is my only critism................. :shrug:

Just as well though the character design is original and very cool. The composition was just a bit too reminiscent of the above piece to overlook.

06-16-2003, 01:17 AM


06-16-2003, 01:28 AM
Awesome modelling :buttrock:

06-16-2003, 01:30 AM
Wow! Amazing Character Design and Modeling!!
Looking forward to your short film!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

06-16-2003, 01:47 AM
Nice exotic look,area and of course the character.well done.:beer:

Corn Dog
06-16-2003, 01:56 AM
How about a tail on him? cause I agree with legs looking a little humanish. Maybe some funky shinbone splints or something.

06-16-2003, 02:24 AM
oh that's an amazing cool man!
I agree with what they said, the style of the leg is a little out of the style of the whole body.


06-16-2003, 04:14 AM
I have nothing to say about your work..
:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

06-16-2003, 04:16 AM
amazing character!
I would like to enjoy more render about this cool guy!
:beer: :thumbsup:

06-16-2003, 04:28 AM
Now that's how I would imagine an alien to look if ever we run into one in the distant planet! very tight, love the whole atmos, looks like it's going to move if you stare at it long enuff!!

he kinda looks relaxed but ready to pounce at the slightest disturbance.
very well done. thanx for posting dude!

06-16-2003, 04:28 AM
I love it! Damn you're growing better every time I see something from you! So you got a job in England now? You used to be in California, right?

06-16-2003, 04:30 AM
Nice Render. Its has a very Brom style quality to it. :thumbsup:

06-16-2003, 05:43 AM
Now this is not a crit, but I would love to see the posture a little exaggerated by that I mean his right hips pushing out a little more to the left and his left foot pushing off the wall and a lot higher? at the moment he looks like he could be standing like this even without a wall and could be ballancing on one foot.

I've attached an image, hope im not being rude for messing with your image dude.

06-16-2003, 05:45 AM
hmm... didn't work oh well.

06-16-2003, 05:55 AM
wow, that's awsome dude. you're really talented. can you post a URL where we could keep track of the short? it would be awsome to watch you progress along!

06-16-2003, 05:58 AM

can someone tell me how to attach a file if this doesnt work? i am html incapable :)

06-16-2003, 06:53 AM
Originally posted by erilaz
Exceptional artwork. The pose is great.:D

Ahem... The pose has a major problem, the right arm cannot be raised so high without some twist. So maybe you can, but with an uncomfort.

Otherwise, great, with a Pascal touch.

06-16-2003, 07:31 AM
Beautiful work.
The way the pants fold on his left leg seems a little incorrect, but it's a beautiful picture. Very nice.
Art! :arteest:


06-16-2003, 07:50 AM
I just noticed something, the pants length is much longer on the guys left leg then the right leg! or is it my imagination??

06-16-2003, 08:09 AM
wow....reminds me of the game outcast...oh the good old times when playing pc games was just ok without having bad conscience....nice flair therefor



p.S. The head is very expressive but hope the eyes aren`t too discreet. A thin brown leahter head band perhaps would look cool, dunno.
Very very cool character!

06-16-2003, 08:46 AM
hmm.. Love your work.. How did you manage that beatifull lightning? By using advanced lightning? Please tell me...

Great :buttrock:

06-16-2003, 08:48 AM
Splendid!....i love the design..the colors....and the image mood in general....i like it because it looks so 3d but with a strong 2d illustration feeling....GREAT!:bounce:

06-16-2003, 08:51 AM
The pose is excellent !

Great lights and colors ! :applause:

06-16-2003, 09:24 AM
Wow... That's a lot of replies!
Thanks every one!
I will do something about the shoulders, they are really quickly skinned right now, and that’s why they look a bit strange.

And I'll try to get a site up and working, I just need to find a good provider first. Anyone have some that you can recommend?

Lildragon: I definitely try to get an image into the next Expose!

Stahlberg: Thanks a lot!
And no, I moved here from Sweden 3 months ago, never been to California. So when are we going to see something new from you?!

Straightmark: Thanks. Yes I use the Light tracer under advanced lightning in max.

SIGIL: Actually the main inspiration (for the pose) came from a sketch by Ian McCaig in ”The Art of Star Wars Episode 2" book. Although I love Brom's work I haven't seen that image before...


06-16-2003, 09:43 AM
I like it:beer:

06-16-2003, 10:14 AM
Sorry I was thinking of another swede with a similar last name, my bad. So where do you work?

Me? I've nothing to show, maybe next month... :)

06-16-2003, 11:16 AM
omg! it reminds of that farscape episode - err.... i think it was episode... yes, 2x22 or so and 3x01 - with that doctor dude. remember? he has that red mask?

06-16-2003, 12:20 PM
I must put a jerk in

06-16-2003, 12:43 PM
I think it's just fine the way it is, no-one knows what an alien really looks like, hell they can be hybrids of us humans, who knows :shrug:

Splendid work Jonas, oh btw can you post your PA character in a new thread so we can get that up in the Gallery? I don't think many new members have seen it. Also make sure to show that kicka$$ wireframe. Send me a pm with the link to the thread when/if you start it.

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06-16-2003, 12:44 PM
reminds me of something from star trek :D...very kewl

06-16-2003, 01:05 PM
congrats with the award :bounce:

06-16-2003, 01:21 PM
Very good!

I would love to have seen a more dynamic camera angle, but this one os really good for allowing us to see the sucker.

For me, the lighting and textures are what really look best. Are you using Brazil or just the Lightracer in Max for rendering? It looks great.

If you have any interest, I am sure folks would love to see some of your textures or wireframes. :)

In addition, a close-up of the face would be cool too. I would love to see some of the finer work that you did there.


06-16-2003, 01:57 PM
pure style, pure brom(with a little corben's touch maybe ;)), pure art, you really got me with one jonas! niiice work!

06-16-2003, 02:43 PM
What's the matter with the head:applause:

06-16-2003, 05:22 PM
That's a very sweet image! Really nicely modelled! I don't wanna be a pain in the and I don't know if it was already mentioned, but somehow I have a problem with the render itself. It's somehow too contrastful and maybe a bit too colorful also the background seems too bumpy to me, but well maybe it's just me. Anyway really awesome image! :thumbsup:

Jonas (, too btw :bounce: )

06-16-2003, 07:37 PM
Originally posted by pascal blanché
pure style, pure brom(with a little corben's touch maybe ;)), pure art, you really got me with one jonas! niiice work!

Thanks Pascal!
Btw, when are those cg model kits coming? soon I hope!

Head Wire Frame (


06-16-2003, 07:40 PM
Hey Jonas, what is up!
Very nice character and render, I'm also looking forward to seeing this short!

Btw- did you hear what happened to Oblivion? Seems like you got out at just the right time!;) Hope things are going well over there in England.

later, Micke Lagnecrantz

06-16-2003, 10:17 PM
hi jonas ,,

how long it takes you to finish the model and the texture ???

06-16-2003, 10:25 PM
Great work man, it is reminiscent of some of the artwork I've seen by Brom. Except his stuff is more undead and less alien. :)

You Rock man!!!

06-17-2003, 05:16 AM
cool work.

...his head is wonderful,but his body is more like a human being...


06-17-2003, 09:22 AM
My only crit would be that his hands look at tiny bit small, and they don't look's kind of distracting.

06-17-2003, 04:04 PM
i luv the textures wow..... now all you need to do is tutorials ;P :applause:

06-17-2003, 04:07 PM
Indeed, very good piece of work....

My goodness, the texturing must have been horrible...


@Jonas: Would you mind posting some of your textures unfolded?

06-17-2003, 04:18 PM
Originally posted by Jonas
Thanks Pascal!
Btw, when are those cg model kits coming? soon I hope!

Head Wire Frame (


ehehe im still thinking about it.. not a lot of time these days :(

06-17-2003, 04:23 PM
Very cool! Or should I say Hot? It's not exactly freezing where he's at!:applause:

06-17-2003, 10:03 PM
Originally posted by pascal blanché
ehehe im still thinking about it.. not a lot of time these days :(

I know what mean... so much to do, so little time...

But I managed to get my website up and running! (


06-18-2003, 09:20 AM
I have visited your website!
so great work!!
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

06-18-2003, 09:25 AM

cant see anything wrong with it at all. great job. (I know that this is not helpful from the standpoint of someone looking for critiques, but its all I got sorry).. Nice

06-18-2003, 09:40 AM
Beautiful render and glad to see you posting your stuff again, looking forward to you getting a site up again. Others have pointed out the rigging things so no point in reiterating that.. my main crit which will probably upset everyone and seems to be a personal bias of mine is the cliche of the three toed beast as it where. Whilst 'Sci fi/alien/fantasy' creatures have no point of reference or convention to adhere to if they've got appendages it would be cool if they seemed to have an implied justification for being why they are and the three toed beast is approaching the ..oh stick a fr*gging horn on it why don't you the preferred 'choice' for most people. :) :beer: :beer: :beer:

06-18-2003, 11:35 AM
@Jonas: Which techniques do you use to create your textures? Especially the leather-materials look absolutely fantastic - and you seem to integrate them into most of your pictures...

Do you paint them in Photoshop, do you scan pieces of leather or do you use photographies?

06-20-2003, 02:26 AM
Wooow, So great work.:D

06-20-2003, 02:47 AM
It is beautiful :eek:
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

06-20-2003, 06:53 PM
although he is definately alien (or a pretty deformed human), you manage to create a sense of inner peace across his face.

this, coupled with an amazingly beautiful "painterly" look, well, I just love it!

like many others here, the first thing that crossed my mind was Gerald Brom, which is not negative in any respect, as he is superb. The second thing was that it looked somewhat Pascal Blanche work, not exactly bad verdict either ;) In short, this one is destined for many desktops :D

I am personally VERY interested in what render/post-work you used/did to achive such a great painted look, so if you have any information you wouldn't mind sharing, please do!

oh, although you have moved to England I hope you keep our Swedish traditions, så ha en riktigt trevlig midsommar! dags för första nubben nu...

that goes for stahlberg too :)


06-23-2003, 10:18 PM
BinarySoup: Trevlig midsommar på dig oxå! (lite sent kanske...)

As I posted earlier in this thread, I'm just using 3dsmax standard scanline renderer with Light Tracer. Nothing fancy. Added some more saturation in photoshop, nothing more than that.


06-24-2003, 04:21 AM
The pose and background remind me of a Brom painting.

Nice work.

06-24-2003, 10:08 AM
Again a good character, how you do it no one knows its unbelievable, good luck !

07-15-2003, 12:50 AM
Amazing work. A-*&@#^$-mazing, in fact.

I can notice immediately the influence of the artist "Brom" in your works - in the subject matter, the poses/environments, and some of the details (like the little metal rings hanging off the quarter-staff) - which is a GOOD thing. Have you thought of sending some of your works to the artist? I think you've done a good enough job on these to seriously consider trying to temp him into some kind of collaboration ...

In the book "Darkwerks" he lists an address for correspondence:
PO Box 112615
PA, 15241

Cheers, Al.

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