Lost Adventurer, Aleks Kirilenko (3D)
LC #42 Pipers Alley

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06-11-2003, 09:21 AM
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Greetings guys,

just made this concept character of a futuristic female officer...

Hope you like it...

06-11-2003, 09:24 AM
very nice!

i love the smooth lightning

06-11-2003, 05:12 PM
nice :)

06-11-2003, 05:30 PM
Great :thumbsup:

06-11-2003, 05:36 PM
nice and great work man....:applause:

06-11-2003, 07:49 PM
that looks ace!:airguitar

But strangeley enough the hip bone bugs me alot, its too edgy and sharp, heh, im a nitpicky guy :D

06-11-2003, 07:50 PM
Wow, that got saved and put in the "inspiration" folder...

Great work,

For somereason though it is reminding me of the Cylon armor from Battlestar Gallactica.


06-11-2003, 07:58 PM
Wow, lol.. God that's... nice..

Thanks, I now got a new Wallpaper :thumbsup:

06-11-2003, 07:59 PM
Looking good, but she has the figure of a Female Cop in uniform. (not very flattering uniform)

Your character however has potential but is not yet a sex symbol. :wip:

[edit] I'll elaborate Her head is smaller that one of her but cheeks which gives her a non perportional figure.

06-11-2003, 08:03 PM
she can pull me over and search me a-n-y-t-i-m-e
looks great


06-11-2003, 08:08 PM
:applause: great painting, very smooth.

Kel Solaar
06-11-2003, 08:08 PM
Great design!! :buttrock:

06-11-2003, 08:10 PM
The color (namely the pink) bothers me. The pose is a bit stiff. The proportions are a little odd, namely the positioning/size of the breasts in relation to the head.

overall, a nice piece.


06-11-2003, 08:41 PM
realy nice work :applause: amazing lighting :drool:

06-11-2003, 08:50 PM
her head is too small.

nice work, but the proportions seem a bit off.

06-11-2003, 09:10 PM
Great perspective and shading :D keep up the great work!:thumbsup:

06-11-2003, 09:23 PM
Very good:thumbsup:

06-11-2003, 09:31 PM
Technically it's very proficient....

but conceptually it's a generic overplayed design.

06-11-2003, 09:47 PM
WoW GreaT! gooD coNcEpt aRt.. welldonE!:applause:

06-11-2003, 10:00 PM
.............................looks like a "velvet Elvis" painting....but whatever rocks your boat. :p

06-11-2003, 10:20 PM
Very, very welldone! Perfect!
BTW I don't think there's something wrong with her hip. Looks like it wasn't the bone but the muscles showing through her pants...


06-11-2003, 11:24 PM
First of All... Thanks all of you guys for your critics AND the good words !!! :beer:

THe whole concept started just with the idea of a massive BUT sexy girl dressed with a robo-style suite.Nothing prototype....just the challence of model..anatomy curnes...leather..metallic..and gadgets...

Without having something specific in mind, I started to draw a brief fast draw of her body, just to symmetrize anatomy The anatomy without the metallic armor on her, is enough acceptable. Maybe I overacted a bit on her arm muscles, I admit that...

All the external armor, gadgets, etc, came up while I started to draw....

A tip: If you find difficult to see symmetry in a draw....look at it through a mirror....it helps really :wip:

That's all for now.....
Therefore......if you still find her too wild and nasty.....KEEP RUNNING!!!! :cool:

Greetings from Greece

06-12-2003, 12:05 AM
good work. nice armour design. :thumbsup:

06-12-2003, 01:21 AM
Very nice indeed. And I love how in the future all women have really hot bodies and only needs armor on their chest and crotch... But hey, I'm not complainin...

06-12-2003, 01:23 AM
very good... great hair

why is everybody talking about proportions here? Its a suit she s wearing if I got this right..

06-12-2003, 03:39 AM
You got kudos from me!! Nice image.... :applause: :thumbsup: :applause: :cool:

06-12-2003, 05:03 AM
Nice job

06-12-2003, 09:18 AM
That's awesome!
could you show us the whole character pic? emm, it'll be wonderful!

06-12-2003, 10:40 AM
:bounce: Man u are great painter - concept designer!!! I don't know what to say more:drool:

06-12-2003, 10:52 AM

06-12-2003, 11:10 AM
Very Nice!

06-12-2003, 01:20 PM
dull and derivative, more personality, less photoshop sheen plz

could do better.

06-12-2003, 01:33 PM
Geeeese! Some rude a** people around here! "Dull and derivitive"?

Looks good to me, maybe I'm just a dull person. I think the reason people are saying the proportions are off is they aren't seeing the armor as such. It maybe looks a little to smooth, like it's made of the same material as her, ummmm... leotard?

06-12-2003, 03:54 PM
MattClary, u just explained why he uses "Palmer" as a nickname :applause:

I like critics, but not being rude without reason.

Thanx in advance

06-12-2003, 04:39 PM
Originally posted by MattClary
I think the reason people are saying the proportions are off is they aren't seeing the armor as such. It maybe looks a little to smooth, like it's made of the same material as her, ummmm... leotard?

or maybe it is because her head really is too darn small...forget the armor and body for a second, look at her head in proportion to her arms/hand...

06-12-2003, 07:54 PM
MMmmmmmm.... if it is, it's pretty slight. Not very noticeable to me. If we could get some straight on shots unposed, nothing fancy, just a flat-shaded render, it would be nice.

06-16-2003, 12:32 PM
Very stylish character, I believe the head looks small due to her aparatus below the neck, but it looks right to me minus that piece ;)

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