View Full Version : Man Firing Shotgun: please crit


GeoffClark
08 August 2008, 06:04 PM
Hello,
I've got a scene of a man shooting a shotgun. It's a demo of the character's movement and the animation of the muzzle flash as well.

Take a look and give me some pointers.

http://geoffclarkanimation.com/files/movies/Shootshotgun/shootembed.htm

Thanks,
GeoffClark

Nucleo
08 August 2008, 06:15 PM
Hey Geoffrey,

This looks pretty good already you have nice weight and overlap. However it feels a bit stiff. If you have a reference i suggest to look at it and see how force works in your shot another thing that could improve your work is exaggeration. Hope this helps.

Andreas

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