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08 August 2008, 06:34 PM
First episode of the animated web series "Business and Pleasure"

08 August 2008, 07:29 PM
Man I really like this cartoon you did, the cell shading looks great.

08 August 2008, 05:32 PM
It seemed that some of the characters teeth moved forward and backwards during their dialogue. I also think more attention needs to be made to the camera, a lot of it just moved about more than necessary and very few of them eased in or out of the movements, which for most camera shots is important. Also I think some of the camera shots were unnecessary, for example panning up a flight of stairs, before cutting to the bottom to watch the heroine sneak up them. I think the truck that crashed looked a little odd, and quite a few of the shots seemed to be comped onto another background that moved to create a parallax kind of effect, but it didn't quite work and just seemed to float around. I liked the vector style rendering. Obviously a lot of hard work, good luck with future episodes! :)

02 February 2009, 03:28 AM
Episode 2...

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