View Full Version : Critics plz

05 May 2003, 06:30 AM
Hey ppl I need some critics eventhough I'm not done yet with the thing thnx everybody
here's the link

05 May 2003, 06:39 AM
Brinkster isn't working so here's another link

05 May 2003, 09:51 PM
Neither link is working...

05 May 2003, 03:36 AM
the link is not working!!!

05 May 2003, 04:30 AM
just remove http:// from the link it worked for me..
well i thought the centre thing was far too strong. i had trouble reading the lil stuff on the side coz the centre image kept on distracting me.

05 May 2003, 04:35 AM
thanks bumskee...its work for me too!!..

05 May 2003, 05:23 AM
is that a business card? If it is, I agree w/ everyone else's commentary. I think it's slightly too wordy. U can say a lot more in fewer words. =) I had to revise my business card goodness how many times..... and even then, it didn't look quite right. So I gave up and went back to school to continue my bioscience junk. =)

05 May 2003, 05:54 AM
I didn't want to clear up the words on right too much cuz it really has nothin to do with it I just wanted to fill up some space anyways thanks for the tips ppl :thumbsup:

05 May 2003, 01:29 PM
It's really hard to read the text, mostly because of the bright wormhole. Try dimming it a bit, maybe use another typeface and another color?

05 May 2003, 02:10 PM
Hey ppl I've been listening to your comments and this is how it turned out:

05 May 2003, 02:12 PM
silly me, I forgot to tell you guys without the http://
Can't help it complain @ geocities :shame:

06 June 2003, 08:19 AM
Looks better now. The text is much easier to read

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