View Full Version : Student Demo Reel - Modeling (WIP)


sneakingsuspicion
06 June 2008, 11:57 AM
I made some updates to my reel. Any thoughts, comments, please feel free.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a43_G7iHYu8 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a43_G7iHYu8)


Thanks!

Sarah

thehive
06 June 2008, 03:58 PM
hey saw your demo, its a good start but there are some issues in your anatomy, i think the male in the demo is the strongest peice the wolf need a lot of work. you really need to study the female an male forms your almost there. Remember quality over quantity
one great model will tump a buch of weak ones.

female:
breast are pointing stright
pose is not dynamic enough
elbows need some faness
the face could use some work ( mouth, jaw, brows)

night scene:
way too dark every where light needs to be concenrated in the center area an fade off

table:
put it in a scene

wolf:
needs a lot of work
and the shot is way too dark to make out the form

male:
best part
shortest in view

DigitalBlaspheme
06 June 2008, 04:47 PM
I agree with thehive, place the male at the beginning and give him some more attention (modeling and time in video), doing that alone would bump this up a bit. I'd work on the wolf (I think its more of a cat lol) as it just doesn't look right. The girls ok, but if this is your modeling reel...work on her, forget those textures for now.

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