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doomy330
06 June 2008, 03:30 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/242608_1213025433/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/242608_1213025433/1024bound)my second ever digital piece, done in about 16 hrs, Photoshop and Painter x. Full description on waht i wanted it to be as a concept is in my gallery

lyndabathory
06 June 2008, 03:20 PM
The work on your soldier/alien has nice volume and detail. The other elements seem much more stylized as though they are from a different piece. I find that the composition is weak and suggest you look at the work of some master painters or popular artists such as Boris Vallejo to help you. Study a piece you like and make sketches to see how they use focus, balance and movement to create dynamic compositions. I am looking forward to seeing your progress!

doomy330
06 June 2008, 10:34 AM
Thank you for the advice. I completely agree with you, i actually started only with the character on the left and went from there. Guess my mystake was to care much less about the rest after i was done with him and just wanted to add a background. It's very hard to get any kind of classes in digital graphics for me, but i'm hoping i'll be able to make something of greater quality soon

lyndabathory
06 June 2008, 01:16 PM
You have taken a great first step by posting (I am here to learn as well). As long as you are motivated and willing to learn, you will improve. Maybe you can create a new composition with this character? Look at the other works --it is a great way to be inspired! ...And there is still 1 week left! :wavey:

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