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06 June 2008, 03:48 PM
( a rust without the fungus
i break away with ur touch
i am a vain hope..
fading along with ur brush stroke... part of a poem tht i wrote :P.. nyway thought i'd put it to good use and color my thoughts a little..its a fusion of reality and dream....a vision tht keeps breaking each time i try to touch it :)....had a hard time keeping it together..:)...hope u like it.

06 June 2008, 04:41 PM
Man... this piece is truly powerful :surprised .. to be honest it took me couple of minute to understand whats going on, but thanx to your color scheme, it's not distracting at all and it's truly wonderful :)

If i were you i will use same technique and same story but with more dramatic perspective view,... but thats me :)

hmmm...Your piece force me to be more accurate in my work now!

Congratulation man


06 June 2008, 05:20 PM
im already amazed by ur work man..dont brush it on me :)....i like this one a some personal issues attached to it :D..thnks for ur kind words tho..really really appreciate it

06 June 2008, 06:39 PM
ohh my god!

supppahh... this is stunning!

06 June 2008, 10:34 PM
Wow! Great Job Sleeky. I saw some images in this contest and i felt great power here! Excellent concept and fusion.

Congrats man!:cool:

06 June 2008, 10:50 PM
Wow, i like this a lot! Realy cool design and fusion.

06 June 2008, 01:36 AM
gys thnks a lot for ur comments..JF..i saw ur go Elevator entry a while back and i was thinkinn..mannn...i was so scared to post a submission here at first..!! again thnks a lotttttttttt. a lottt.

06 June 2008, 06:32 AM
Very well done.

06 June 2008, 03:36 PM
really dynamic pic. congrats for the great work :)

06 June 2008, 09:59 AM
Cheer! superb works. :applause:

06 June 2008, 10:56 AM
o o
very nice

06 June 2008, 05:49 PM
This is an incredible take on the 2D/3D fusion. I love and marvel at what you have created. If I may suggest, this piece would be even more powerful if the composition was not in perfect thirds. The hair/tentacles are so interesting I would like to see how some of them end. Congratulations and best of luck!

06 June 2008, 08:48 PM
magical! I think you will be one of the winners.

06 June 2008, 10:21 PM
Honestly I wouldnt change a thing on it! This to me is a strong canidate for the win! :deal:

Although I read you poem and I am not much a a poem type but I am sure that rust isnt a fungus.... so rust with out the fungus is the normal state of rust isnt it? If I took it to literal, its because I am not good at understanding poems, sorry, lol :D

06 June 2008, 02:01 AM
sensational!! :eek: the amount of detail and creativity is absolutely top notch! i'm sure you'll win! :p :bounce: cheers dude! :beer:

06 June 2008, 08:37 AM
thank u u all for ull kidnest word..i actually wanted to go witha diifrent more full perspective but then changd my mind... but may be if there is time left i'll try another perspective..busy doing the summer sem :( ...thnx for the suggestions as i believe it'll help me a lot to grow :)..again thank u all..

oh..hee.hee..rust without the fungus as in it didnt create the got rusted with something else ... like vain emotions tht i might have expected..:P eaah its a wierd poem nyway..but i like it :)

06 June 2008, 10:47 AM
Very interesting vision! This kind of geometrical explosion reminds me "Galatea of the Spheres" - a work of the great Salvador Dali.

06 June 2008, 01:12 PM
:surprised i never heard of mr. Salvador dali before..altho i kinda paint a little too :)..just checked it out..its interesting..really interesting!!!..not something usuall at all!!! thnx vleonida...think i found my mentor.

06 June 2008, 07:29 PM
Very cool sleeky, the 3d part is great, it's a cool idea that was well executed, but the 2D part detracts from it. I feel the stuff you added in photoshop are lacking, they just don't add to the 3d part, it feels like you did it just because you had to, not that it was an integral part of the design. I think the glow effects and everything are a bit OTT for me, again feels very superflous. It feels to me like the sort of thing you'd see in a video game magazine, or on a graphics card - verging on garish/tacky. The choice of colour feels like it was a bit neglected, the bright blue isn't working for me, I think more subtle tones would improve it alot, also just crisper graphics without the random outer glow sort of stuff. Anyway, that's my two cents.

06 June 2008, 12:34 PM
hello Samione, thnks alot for ur comment :)..thts a booster :D..eaah kidding... im still kinda working on this one...with the time i have spare :(..may be if its done before the final day :).

06 June 2008, 02:29 AM
To me this is the pick of the lot! Awesome!

06 June 2008, 01:20 PM
This is truly amazing! If it were up to me, I think this one would be in the top 3 at least! Well done.

06 June 2008, 09:27 PM
Its a beautiful piece of art....well done

06 June 2008, 01:59 PM
The Idea is great but I think it lacks of post production. It's raw to me.

06 June 2008, 04:11 PM
Nice, I like the composition and colors

06 June 2008, 09:43 PM

I feel the fluid movement from the left to the right fits the image perfectly. I can see the design and the fusion in this piece. Great!

06 June 2008, 01:01 AM
nice work... i like the hexagons...actualy my concept is related to those forms to.

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