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05 May 2008, 07:49 PM
I don't fell that I am ready to make portfolio worth art, I think I can give much more, my goal is to achive at 100% what I have in mind and right know I only make like 25% of the idea because of the lack of technique, also my weakspot is perspective been able to put your character on xtreme poses I need that knowledge , so if anyone can recommend me some books or tutorials would be great,

well the first Thing Iam going to post is actually me going twisted hulk or Doomsday It was homework for college we had to make ourselfs like superheroes in 1 week, this is actually my second work I am attempting to finish on Photoshop.
I already presented this but I don't think it is ready yet, obviously the background is missing but some other things are missing too. please let me know what you think

05 May 2008, 10:35 PM
There is a really good anatomy book for drawing the figure in action and deep foreshortening by Burne Hogarth , it's called dynamc figure drawing. You should check it out, it may help you.

About your piece, I like he concept. the rocks on his shoulder are well done.
Although I think that if you added some stronger shadows to his skin he would look better.
keep it up!

05 May 2008, 11:58 PM
Hi Gyorkland

I'm loving this piece man! This is similiar to my favorite type of style, lots of details and a good use of color! My only crit would be it looks like the guy might fall over to his left from the pose you've given him, I think if you brought his left leg out a little more to balance out with the arm it'd give it a more natural look. The amount of detail is fantastic, I can't wait to see an update, good luck in class with this piece, let us know what grade you get on it!

05 May 2008, 04:44 PM
thanks for the comments
Memorial-Strife: Thank you so much for the tip I am going to check out that book in a minute

exStatic1: thanks for the crit, you know I didn't knew what made him look so akward until I read your commentary, you are totally right Iam going to solve that problem inmediatly

arielmedel: Gracias por decirme lo que piensas,te agradeceria muchisimo si pudieras decirme cuales son los problemas de anatomia para poder solucionarlos.

I appreciate that everyone liked the textures that I am giving this guy and if in case anyone want to know they are all done with the standar brush with hardness 100% and changing the opacity and size I really don't like to use the other brushes.

05 May 2008, 06:14 PM
Gyorkland (, con gusto, pero no veo la imagen ya...

06 June 2008, 12:12 AM
wow nice pic, whats the size of the canvas?

08 August 2008, 08:44 PM
this is something I' ve been working since yesterday, again it is for a homework and it is not finished I had this Idea since dominance war and my homework was a perfect excuse
Ohh, by the way their name is Eclipse, the main guy has like a moon head, I think it is pretty obvious that the head below is the sun and the tails, I don't know, I guess they the stars

08 August 2008, 09:54 PM
This is a wicked piece of work. Although it does seem like he's about to fall over, it still looks great. He reminds me of a villain that would be use in The Incredible Hulk. I wonder how a 3D model version would look like.

08 August 2008, 11:14 PM
English please. This is an English forum. I can't moderate posts that are in another language except to remove them. Thank you.

08 August 2008, 12:34 AM
Sorry I always write on english but this guy wrote on spanish and I asummed that he didn't talked english so I answered him on the same language

08 August 2008, 09:33 PM
Hi, I've been working on this guy like an hour it's actually full body but I haven' work on the legs yet. I didn't use a sketch, just painted a brown spot and this came up it's very rough but I think he has some hope, maybe I'll put him on a composition someday

10 October 2008, 09:57 PM
Hope to have any crit someday but anyway here is something I did for work they asked me to make a characer for some sort of cereal my boss told me to do like a superhero and i remembered a super rino that I did when I was 7 that is why the style is a little retro
the background is not finish yet have to work more on the clouds and the stars I also want to put the moon so I will also have to paint some backlight on the Rino.

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