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04 April 2008, 06:28 PM
Brajan Martinovic is entered in the "Uplift Universe Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

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04 April 2008, 06:42 PM (

this is the concept for one of the characters that will remain silent and motionless but his presence should have and important role in making a grim atmosphere :)

04 April 2008, 06:50 PM (

an alien should resemble a dolphin a little, im trying to make some connections to Uplift books although i havent read any, i think the dolphin aliens are mentioned as more evolved and willing to help :) so i would like to have one here as a good guy, humans are bad and corrupted by another alien race that will remain it really is :D

04 April 2008, 08:29 PM
That's a piece of fine art in here!!
Which book is your movie based on?

04 April 2008, 09:53 PM
hi, tnx! its not really based on any book..i used to read some extreme conspiracy stuff : ) so i guess it influenced me a little for basic plot..and im still not sure what is it about, but im sure about the characters so im doing them first.

04 April 2008, 06:36 PM
I like the dolphin alien a lot.
Good design. I like the flow of the muscles.


04 April 2008, 06:42 AM
Thank you, i hope i will make the alien look close to that concept in 3d :)

04 April 2008, 06:20 PM (

Another bad human...the concept for it was rather poor so i modeled most of the stuff on the fly. armor plates are detachable so i will try to make a few variations for animation, including some color change. normal and cavity maps are complete. i will do some photoshop detailing later. stains and specular masks...+ adding some insignia...
it kinda looks weird to me, but i think he does look let me know what u think. tnx

04 April 2008, 06:25 PM
Very cool.

Personally not sure about the color choice....but the model is friggin scary (as in like, dark and ominous)

04 April 2008, 06:29 PM
fantastic stile...
in special i like these little details on metal an clothes.


04 April 2008, 06:33 PM
thanks! yeah the colors will be changed later for sure..i wanted to avoid the typical red+white+black=evil combination but i guess i did it subconsciously : )) there should be a bit of royal feel to it so i decided to go with the more purple instead of red..but i think it will all go black and grey

04 April 2008, 09:47 PM
Really cool. Would be cool to see the process for something like that, i'm not as skilled in modeling. Keep it up!!!

04 April 2008, 11:35 PM (

refined textures. i guess its 90% done..few more tweaks here and there..but i will leave it be for now and start rigging it or model other characters. critique welcome, cheers

04 April 2008, 02:38 AM
Very nice modeling and texturing. Also amazing concepts.
Only thing i can think of are the eyes. Maybe if you wanna make him really look like a bad guy you could try out red eyes instead of blue.

looking forward for more ;-)

04 April 2008, 09:51 AM
Hi, yeah the red eyes are evil for trying to avoid using red for evil in general..maybe i will do a squad of those guardians protecting the black pope, leader could have more red or black paint on armor...they are supposed to torture that alien later on, i want them to appear somewhat regal and fancy until they start doing the bad things :)

04 April 2008, 10:16 AM
Looks good. the alien looks very interesting.:scream:

04 April 2008, 10:31 AM
WOW! amazing stuff here!!! cant wait to see something in motion!

04 April 2008, 10:56 AM
Hi, yeah the red eyes are evil for trying to avoid using red for evil in general..maybe i will do a squad of those guardians protecting the black pope, leader could have more red or black paint on armor...they are supposed to torture that alien later on, i want them to appear somewhat regal and fancy until they start doing the bad things :)

Then maybe you can instead of the red eyes use a logo like from some evil empire. Like an organization. This logo might make the costume more a uniform and add that little arrogance.

curious to see next

04 April 2008, 11:04 AM
tnx guys! i have the logo..its similar to that shape on top of the staff that pope is was on the chest armor first but i removed it becouse it looked like a bad case of mapping : ))) i'll put it again but maybe across both chest plates..its all just fine tuning now..tnx for crits!

04 April 2008, 09:31 PM
Hats down and :thumbsup: mate.
Looking forward to seeing more.

04 April 2008, 08:56 AM
simply Great Great Great!!

04 April 2008, 09:17 AM
thank you guys! im currently rigging the model, i hope i will update soon if everything goes as planned, but im not much of a rigger : ))

04 April 2008, 10:21 PM (

a small update while im doing the not so exciting rigging stuff. added small bump textures on top of normal maps to increase detail on metal and clothes. also trying a bit different coloring scheme..
im very happy with render time, it never goes above one minute, i think this pic took about 20 secs in good old scanline..there will be a mray occlusion pass later..i guess that one will take about 5 mins max..

04 April 2008, 04:07 PM
This is looking fantastic Brajan! The materials you've got going on in there are very convincing. My only crit right now would be i liked the render with the velvet type material for ther under purple garment, Right now it has a slight bit of bump on it which is the same bump on the straps. Could be cool to go back to that soft backlit velvet look just for that.
Keep at it man, can wait to see the dolphin!


04 April 2008, 04:21 PM
Very impressive.
And the rendertimes for MR - even more impressive :)

I like the design.


04 April 2008, 08:23 PM
tnx guys! the render is from max scanline..thats why its so quick..just shadow maps and no fancy lighting : )) i didnt try mray yet but i hope it wont take longer than 5 mins.. it depends on whats in the scene anyway..i just hope i will have enough resources to keep rendering the main pass in scanline : ))

velvet material is a good idea..i had that velvety look when no textures were applied but now i think i like this bumpy one better, i think i will just remove the bump from that strap on elbow..
tnx for comments!

04 April 2008, 11:51 PM
Looking very good. Try finalRender for rendering... it's faster and it gives very nice results. Once you have your full scene set up, the scanline can be a pain in the ass. Specially when you're dealing with lots of raytrace. Good luck!

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04 April 2008, 05:56 AM
Very nice character,and nice texture!Good luck!

04 April 2008, 09:49 AM
Nice work here I want to follow that.

04 April 2008, 09:27 PM
i a Fen of his Head-Armor, very cool Design!

04 April 2008, 11:54 AM
Ej Brajan this looks great... You got some spare time I can see :)

04 April 2008, 02:28 PM
Tnx Hrc! sleepless weekends weeee :D

04 April 2008, 02:31 PM
Good modelling and nice clean render :thumbsup: I like :)

04 April 2008, 02:50 PM
great texture work :-)

04 April 2008, 09:47 PM
tnx guys! i'll be posting a small update soon

04 April 2008, 10:02 PM (

the rig is finally complete, it was a very hard character to setup. lots of cloth layers and not much of a rigger so i added a lot of small controls to help me manually tweak the overlapping areas, especially around the shoulders. i've also posted a small turntable quicktime here:

i see others contestants post their vids, i hope im not violating any rules by that, if so, pls let me know and i will unshare it.

04 April 2008, 10:07 PM
Awesome stuff so far! I can't WAIT to see what you're going to cook up!

04 April 2008, 03:51 PM
This really looks great....nice progress.....canīt wait to see more!

04 April 2008, 08:22 PM
Yes, this is beautiful ! Great design, great modeling, great render !

04 April 2008, 08:16 AM
thank you people :) i'm currently modeling the black priest character, the the neodolphin needs texturing and rigging. then i'll move to do some environment. be updating soon ;)

04 April 2008, 10:38 PM (

here's a little modeling update on the black pope. getting the concept right and trying to further articulate the character. i reused the guardian rig so that part is 90% done, gotta hurry so i'll take a lot of shortcuts like that :)

04 April 2008, 10:59 PM
Hi Brajan!

this look great.... (only this??? Itīs a joke, all look great)


04 April 2008, 11:07 PM
hahaha (or, jajaja in spanish : )) i have to admit that i got too much of it still in modeling phase, + environment is still just a vague image in my head. the dolphin is modeled, just the texture work and some tweaking left..i will try to reuse the guardian rig again. then finally doing the animation. well, if i dont make it i can always do it for portfolio ;) but this challenge is just real fun to do :)

04 April 2008, 11:08 PM continue to impress!

04 April 2008, 08:34 AM
Im reminded of the Harkonen....definitely a good thing. :D

Keep it up-cant wait to see it all in action!

04 April 2008, 08:37 AM
The characters look great!!! Do you have an idea on what they're going to do?

04 April 2008, 09:58 AM
pozdrav :) well, i have a vague story in my doing much of that on the fly, its not a great way to work but there is no time. i think i will make a 30 sec trailer, few longer shots cut to bits and pieces and mixed...that way i can avoid worrying too much about direction and continuity. the story is clichee about human kind that is corrupted by an alien race. after fifth world war earth was completely devastated and the peaceful neodolphin race came to help and teach. other alien races also came but to exploit. one of them is the seductive group of aliens that never appears directly but uses religion to manipulate people on top into hate towards the neodolphins, telling them how they came here to trick the human kind and turn them into slaves. evil aliens armed humans and eventualy all neodolphins were outcast, and their leader crucified. so, its about some old war between those two alien races, humans are used here as a tool for a revenge against neodolphins. i guess i will concentrate on the crucifiction shots, including the beating and torture executed by the guardians. its an idea i got becouse of Easter timing of this challenge : ))

04 April 2008, 04:13 PM
:curious: man, you really are friend of Sarah Connor. :buttrock:

04 April 2008, 05:10 PM
:curious: man, you really are friend of Sarah Connor. :buttrock:

rofl! My CPU is a neural net processor, a learning computer :cool: sorry for offtopic! updates comming real soon!

04 April 2008, 05:59 PM
yes, sorry...back to waiting than :)

04 April 2008, 07:20 PM (

modeling update. its about to be finished, i decided to make him gloves, partly because hands are hard to do and there is no time, and dark or dark red gloves would make him look more evil and his pale head will be more in focus. the head is huge, so i'll maybe do some proportions tweak before the rigging.. this character will be static for the most part so there will be no need for a cloth sim. i may do some morph targets for folds tho...

04 April 2008, 05:22 AM
Oh man...I am so excited to see where you take this!!!

04 April 2008, 08:39 AM
Excellent modelling :thumbsup:

04 April 2008, 11:13 AM
Hey, just saw your bad man turntable. Modelling work is stunning! :surprised
I looked the model very carefullly to see some error but there is none :) Everything in place, for me.
Exept maybe one small detail, on the upper arm armour... there are some very specular skratches, maybe too specular? In the first second I could not say that they were a scratches or some kind of ornament...

Keep up, Ill surely watch your thread! :thumbsup:

04 April 2008, 03:45 PM
thank you guys!

@npantic, thank you for crits! well that scratch wasnt even meant to be specular, but i like how it turned out. it depends on hdr map..i will have to adjust it shot by shot to get what i want :)

04 April 2008, 05:06 PM
fantastic Mesh again...

In special i like the clothes.


04 April 2008, 05:12 PM
excellent character again ! You have an excellent style (do I know another word but excellent ?)
Can't wait to see what is coming next !:applause:

04 April 2008, 02:14 AM (

texturing has been completed for the most part..still need to do maps for the ear devices and his staff..i'm still experimenting with the clothing look and feel..i want it look metallic ..unlike normal cloth..and it should behave very heavy. i've also done some basic rigging for the body, and the face rig. i'll combine bones and morphs..

04 April 2008, 02:48 AM
Damn dude seeing your entry makes me feel depressed...I might as well quit now :(

04 April 2008, 04:18 AM
Oh man... we are all in trouble.

04 April 2008, 07:59 AM
Crap! Horrible! I think you should just give up right now! :D

Serioulsly impressive...I cant wait to see him rigged, and waddeling around!


04 April 2008, 08:16 AM
lol, thank you guys : ))) i certainy didnt expect such reactions for this character, i think it turned out a bit too disguisting than i intended, but im pleased you like it, it has been a hard mapping weekend :D

04 April 2008, 02:03 PM
Will you adopt me and teach me how to make stuff like this!

Well done!!!

04 April 2008, 05:34 PM
Those characters look great! Can't wait to see the dolphin alien...

04 April 2008, 10:22 PM (

refined textures, i abandoned the metallic clothes look and remodeled the cloth around his neck. the textures have an old cloth, decomposing look : )) same with his face, old, decomposing and drooling lol
im using the basic max translucent shader for skin, but im happy how it renders, i will have to test it in motion tho..
i'll do the rest of the textures later ( ears )..trying to finish all the characters in next 10 days, so that i could animate and do the environments.
crits welcome, cheers!

04 April 2008, 07:22 AM
Oh man...
Can't wait to see your animation :)


04 April 2008, 07:44 AM
this really shaping great...can`t wait to see it in motion.

04 April 2008, 09:16 AM
My God! What have you done with his face???
He got plague? Or what?

He looks too scarry and sick now...
I like older, untextured version better... :(

04 April 2008, 09:53 AM
lol, he is an old decomposing bastard and a pervert that is manipulated by evil aliens who give him pleasure. in return, he leads the human kind into war with the dolphin aliens :) im still working on the story : ))) anyway, im thinking of making him more pale and not so bloody, but yeah he should look as sick as possible :D

04 April 2008, 10:08 AM
Bastard deserves every blister and scab he got!!! Moth***f**!

04 April 2008, 10:46 AM
Bastard deserves every blister and scab he got!!! Moth***f**!

:D damn right!

ok ok, to keep this post on topic; the dolphin alien is modeled and partly rigged, and awaiting to be textured and i hope to complete him in next few days. so much for May first : ))

04 April 2008, 11:02 AM
The character looking realy cool!Best to you!:bowdown:

04 April 2008, 02:26 PM
Wow, really nice work. Your characters are amazing.

05 May 2008, 10:13 AM
Marvellows models! incredible texturing! you got a true talent. my complimets!!:applause:

05 May 2008, 01:29 PM
Thank you peoples :), i'll be updating soon

05 May 2008, 08:14 PM
i visited this forun some time ago...
Now i can see your characters....

simple GREAT!!
fantastic progress....


05 May 2008, 09:06 PM
Excellent ! He is very Ugly !

Th basic transluscent shader of Max looks nice, you can keep it like that, it works !

05 May 2008, 09:50 PM
Very nice model! I like the little details that showup nicely with that (also nice ;) ) shader. I'm looking forward for some moving stuff: it will be interesting if your animation qualities can reach this level, in this short amount of time... :argh: :)

05 May 2008, 08:47 AM
You better believe it Dutchman... Seen some of his stuff... And I know for fact that he can go on without sleep or food for weeks :)

05 May 2008, 09:35 AM
You better believe it Dutchman... Seen some of his stuff... And I know for fact that he can go on without sleep or food for weeks :)

rofl! i hope your're right Hrc :D

the characters are finished 90% i think...i will do the environment as i animate : )) no sleep till brooklyn!

05 May 2008, 03:32 PM
your black pope is amazing!!
I saw other models and sketches in your thread...i can only say WOW! =)
Good luck)

05 May 2008, 05:45 PM

great character design, really looking forward to seeing what this will look like as a short!

05 May 2008, 06:17 AM (

Software: 3ds max,After Effects

i guess this could get in the pre-vis. its a crowd test for the guardians. yesterday i wanted to try it at least..i made a lowpoly version of the model and rigged it on the biped that uses a free mocap walk loop...which isnt really a good loop but it was ok for a test : ) then i cached it and copied the guardians and offset the time and place..u can still see some of the obvious duplicates. a lot of postwork was done, i copied the layer and made more guardians for the background. i think this is a fairly easy solution for making a simple marching sequence, no direction changes. just a better mocap and a lot more individualy placed instances. oh, and they certanly need weapons :)

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05 May 2008, 06:30 AM
Excellent progress :thumbsup: I think the test works well.

05 May 2008, 07:39 AM
Very cool :D...I didn't notice the duplicates myself...looked really natural!

05 May 2008, 07:42 AM

Simple solutions like that work!
Just dont mention duplicates, biped, mocap - it just works in your shot.


05 May 2008, 02:44 PM
Hey this is looking great!

Keep going matie! you're doing well!

This is one of 3 of my faves!

05 May 2008, 05:44 PM
tnx guys! :)

@grzesiekj, tnx for the tip : )) i thought the duplicats were too obvious so i had to mention it, although, i have stared at it for a long time :D

05 May 2008, 10:16 AM
looks great! keep it up!:wip: :scream:

05 May 2008, 10:18 PM (

im doing a quick cathedral...i did one material yesterday and im using it for the whole building. so far its ok and very fun to do :) its a little part of it and it should get a lot bigger till tomorrow :) using instances and only few materials so im sure the render wont die. im really hoping to finish the modeling stuff this week so that i could start animating and rendering.

05 May 2008, 10:23 PM
btw, it shouldnt look so fantasy-like planning to add a lot of cables hanging from the roofs and expanding outwards. and also some kind of electricity roaming around those spikey stuff :arteest:

05 May 2008, 10:56 PM
A "quick" material?!?!? Wow...if that's your definition of quick I'm afraid to see what a lengthy modelling session would bring about :eek:

Can't wait to see it come to life with all of the cables and electricity and stuff!

05 May 2008, 12:20 AM
tnx! i cant wait to start animating...partly because im tired of modelling and there is really no time left :D
oh, the quick material was really quick..zbrush rocks! :wip:

05 May 2008, 07:43 PM (

cathedral update..i did an occ pass and twaked it a little in ps, trying to see what the final render could look like. for now, i will animate the camera flying about it and zooming on the window where pope is appearing to hail the troops on the ground. so i'll model only the things that are visible in that shot, for now.

05 May 2008, 09:49 PM
another amazing job Brajan ! Can't wait the final !

05 May 2008, 11:50 PM
DAMN dude...the detailing is amazing! All the little

So pretty much the only way I have a chance at this, is if all the other entrants' computers crash simultaneously sometime between now and the deadline :(

05 May 2008, 12:24 AM
lol, well anything can happen :D
i was thinking about switching to illustration today :D becouse i spent too much time on modeling and rigging, it was fun..but its really too late for making a still now.. : ))
im getting hooked on these really makes me do something, every personal project i start i dont finish becouse there is no deadline :)

05 May 2008, 08:28 AM
Phew! Looking nice! Gothic and stylish! Keep it comming!

05 May 2008, 02:52 AM (

another update. its very fun to do :D i think i wont be doing the back part of it. just no time. i might finish it when this is over : ))

05 May 2008, 04:45 AM
Great looking. Keep it going.

05 May 2008, 09:03 AM
it looks brutal! :) how much time it takes to render?

05 May 2008, 09:42 AM
tnx! the rendering took about 2 minutes in scanline...i guess the occlusion pass will take twice as much..i plan to make a long fly around it, so maybe i will render the small resolution needed for flv, if time becomes a problem : ))

05 May 2008, 01:50 AM
I 'd love to follow your thread.

05 May 2008, 04:25 PM (

i did a quick photoshop wires and cables hanging from the church to see how it could look. and the electrified spires..bats are a joke, but i could add something flying around if i have time : ))
i completed the alien pretty much, i will post some images soon.

05 May 2008, 09:29 PM
better quit dude .. :banghead:

awesooome work..
waiting eagerly fr the alien and animations!!

05 May 2008, 07:57 PM (

Software: 3ds max

work in progress...this is kind of strange animation to me : )) but i like it, i think it will look bizzarely brutal as i imagined it, afer postwork..oh, this is the first time im animating 3 characters in one scene, ever lol. its fun, but very exhausting..
its widescreen originaly..and the staffs that guardians are holding will be replaced by a new model..

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05 May 2008, 12:04 AM
Congratulation, this is really a beautiful job! very good!!!

05 May 2008, 02:19 AM
Oooh I love it! Lots of subtlety in when he switches the hand that he holds the pole in, etc.


05 May 2008, 12:00 PM
This is great looking :buttrock: How one can achieve so many subtle motion in handkeyed animation? How long did you played with that shot?

05 May 2008, 02:14 PM
thank you guys!
it was a fun thing to animate...i did the alien fall animation while i was skinning him and later i put the guardian on the side to kick him : )) i liked it so i tried to go a bit further by placing another guardian to throw him to the floor...that worked, so i tried to make him grab his head and push him even more..that felt like a brain surgery to do, since i had to use link contraints :wip: i think i spent 4-5 days total on that...this shot should continue as the camera looks up and sees the cables going out of the pole and conecting with the huge net goes to that cathedral...the whole shot is suposed to be seen thru another alien's eyes, which will become obvious later on. i'm planning to do a 30 -40 seconds total, including some panoramic shots of the cathedral...i better hurry :D

05 May 2008, 05:05 PM
The cathedral and your animation look incredible... Did you use any reference for the cathedral? The character design is really unique too...

Great work,
Have fun,

05 May 2008, 05:18 PM
Animation is cool !
I think we have a huge entry here, probably something near to win !

05 May 2008, 05:23 PM
tnx! I'll be animating for a few more days i guess, then i'll go rendering. so the updates will come soon i hope :)


06 June 2008, 08:49 PM
Ahhhh! With all the server troubles I've been finding it hard to post!

Anyway, cheering you on dude! Looking awesome! Keep going! :D

06 June 2008, 05:59 AM (

Software: 3ds max,After Effects

i like how the rendering turned out..although i would like to improve some things in animation. i will leave it be for now and move on to finish animating next big shot with the pope. there will be some details added later, like the wounds and blood decals on the floor and guardians. and some random particles flying around.. the fade ins and outs will look like the injury screen effect in Call of Duty lol.
originaly i animated this in 30 fps, then i slowed it down to 25, its less smooth and somehow more real..hope you like.

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06 June 2008, 06:03 AM
THATS VERY NICE WORK! And I like also how you play with the camera!:beer:

06 June 2008, 06:51 AM
Wow dude that's awesome :D...I feel bad for the little guy :(

06 June 2008, 11:41 AM
tnx! oh the little guys have no chance against evil humans :D

06 June 2008, 11:47 AM

This is fantastic!

06 June 2008, 01:16 PM
really great. I see you removed the twist part when bad guy stuck the stick in the good guy, why?

06 June 2008, 03:07 PM
oh that..its still there but the camera goes down..i forgot about it :) its a nice detail tho...jbga :D

Seahorseking thank you so much you bl**dy bas***d! :) :) :)

06 June 2008, 03:30 PM
Oh! man this is good! Love it! MORE! MOOOOORRE!

06 June 2008, 06:34 PM
that was great... no critique from me...

06 June 2008, 07:54 PM
Stari moj, kapa dole,, animacija izgleda vrhunski, , karakteri takodjer,, jedva chekam da vidim final........ROKAJ!!!:buttrock::applause:

06 June 2008, 08:32 PM
thank you for support ppl! means a lot : )

AiR hvala hvala! rokam dalje crvene mi oči :D

06 June 2008, 05:26 AM
I love the hand grabbing, the little shake of that hand, as if the alien is sobbing.



06 June 2008, 02:59 PM
its really great...
models, rendering and smooth animation
hard to critic anything..

06 June 2008, 08:30 PM
awesome render. just awesome. look forward to audio with that!

06 June 2008, 10:05 PM
thank you guys, updates soon! :D

06 June 2008, 07:27 AM
WOW! This is hand made animation? (!) It has the real motion capture of fine actors quality! Really fantastic and moving scene of the violence, and humiliation! Amazing work!

06 June 2008, 04:18 PM
:) thank you Nenad! yes its all keyframe there..i will have some mocap walks for distant characters in other shots..

06 June 2008, 02:45 PM
Short but very impressive!

06 June 2008, 02:27 PM (

hi all, sorry for not being active lately. most of the shots have been composited so far. here are some screens

06 June 2008, 02:30 PM (

and some more screens. these still lack a few elements, and some color grading to fit the rest of the film.

06 June 2008, 03:10 PM
I demand you post video NOW! :argh:

06 June 2008, 04:53 PM
lol, i will post something while the pc renders some occlusion pass, it takes a lot of time to post a flv here :D

06 June 2008, 08:49 PM
where is it?
I want to see it! the pictures look GREAT!

good luck with the final touches :)


06 June 2008, 05:12 PM
tnx g! i'll post video as soon as i finish still rendering some of the shots lol, and im afraid there wont be any's a bit disguisting..i never did something so disguisting, it was fuuuun :D

06 June 2008, 11:19 AM
Where is it? The time is runnig up! Comon guys ,your work looks great,Dont give up now!:thumbsup:

06 June 2008, 11:36 AM (

Software: 3ds max,After Effects,ZBrush

here it is, finally..i guess im the only one that is crazy enough to send the video one hour before the deadline..jeeez!. i hope it will be uploaded on time.

umm..regarding the vid itself...its weird..i like how it turned out, i guess becouse its disguisting and thats not really my specialty : )) flv made the quality drop really bad..i will upload the .mov somewhere is its ok...oh, and i wish i had time for sound..any sound :(

ok have fun : ))

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06 June 2008, 11:41 AM
Great Work!Texture,models,composition is really good!

Best to you!

06 June 2008, 12:07 PM
Congrats!!! Characters, compositing, textures, all look amazing. You should make a version with sound still! can see some great music coming in as the camera falls below the clouds and the title appears....

06 June 2008, 12:28 PM
Shit man..that was brutal, and DEFINITELY calls for some sound effects!

A massive amount of subtly in the movement of the characters. I would have loved to see more of the cathederal structure, and the crowd shots.

I love the opening POV shot.

Just class work man! Good luck!

06 June 2008, 12:37 PM
Wow that was really great, shame it didnt have any sound but I'm still speechless.

Great work

Chris Haigh

06 June 2008, 01:16 PM
tnx guys : )) oh yes the video cries for sound...i just had no that i think of it, this is the first short ever that i actually completed : ))

06 June 2008, 01:17 PM
Congratulations on your finished piece Brajan, it's an amazing work, both on the animation , the rendering and the mood aspects...
Have some rest now, it's really deserved! :)


06 June 2008, 01:39 PM
superbly executed. congrats on finishing it.

06 June 2008, 01:41 PM
Now that was dark! Great movie. And he got what he desrved too.


06 June 2008, 02:28 PM
Wow dude that was awesome....just pure awesome. Having to wait so long for updates was well worth it. I think if you add some sound to it, that'll make an amazing addition to your portfolio. Good luck....the judges are definitely going to be impressed by this one!

06 June 2008, 03:26 PM
Good job! IT realy calls for a sound & music you should spend a week extra to do it!!
Good luck!

06 June 2008, 03:52 PM
I kidd, I kidd...
It's great! Little brutal but great! It's a win, no doubt...

PS: I know who can do the Emperors voice :))) Smarty from "the Bombs" :))))))

06 June 2008, 04:12 PM
Its Sick and I love it!
Great job, the animation is excellent, overall wonderful work.
Make sure youll add the sound and music to it, even if its past deadline.
Its worth it!



06 June 2008, 04:19 PM
lol, tnx seahorse! yes its short, im short too, got a problem with that buddy? :P
hahah, i dont remember smartys voice...they were all terrible and unnecessessesescerily rude : )))

ivanisavich and mr. G thank you guys for comments! im happy u like it, i was worried that the vid would be interesting just to myself...i'll definitely put the sound in one day

ShiFT team thank you! and i'll be taking a long sleep soon : ))

alen fala fala, konačno gotovo! :)

06 June 2008, 04:23 PM
Really great work dude! I love the models and the textures. All the best to you. :thumbsup:

06 June 2008, 03:52 AM
This really is quite beautiful work. It would have been awesome to have gotten some sound with it. Great luck to you with this entry.

06 June 2008, 05:26 AM
this is actually amazing work... everything from modelling to texturing and animation are just top notch... good luck

06 June 2008, 01:12 PM
man, this is sooo good! i like it very much. what i like the most is emperors expresion and animation. very good work, congratulations!

06 June 2008, 02:14 PM
The silence of the movie is how we stay after watched the movie .. I'm speechless.

Very very very good!!

Congratulations and good luck :beer:

06 June 2008, 04:09 PM
thank you people! im very happy u like it :D

06 June 2008, 12:29 PM
great work buddy :applause: :love:

06 June 2008, 01:52 PM
haha thank you maksy! :beer:

06 June 2008, 02:16 PM
This one makes me wait for the sequel! Great work, both technically and artistically!
Svaka Chast!

06 June 2008, 05:55 PM
tnx, i will probably do an expanded version later, with sound : )) hvala! :)

06 June 2008, 05:16 PM
Itīs a really voilent movie - very impressive, and this without sound! Very good characters and sets, very largescaled castle... We want to see more, especially if there would be a happy end at the end of all... when will come the continuation of the story?
Best wishes,

06 June 2008, 06:52 PM
danke Dietrich : )) yes im thinking about expanding it and adding sound of was a lot of work spent on modeling and rigging all those guys so i'll defnitelly play with them more.

actually the ending could be interpreted as ''happy'' killed the main bad guy to save the alien

...or he just wanted too eat the alien :D
..or he was an alien too : ) my mind..the guardian had a little bit of human feelings inside of him left and he wanted to save the life of that alien, even if that meant killing another human...i think that fits best with the ''relations'' theme here..
so they might escape the planet, or other guardians may find them and kill them :)

06 June 2008, 09:03 AM
...maybe then you need another shot of guardian, or smth. To show his change of heart or mind.

Perhaps alien looking at guardian and screeming: "Father... please....father..." :)
And later he tells alien to tell his sister that he was right about... :):)

A anyway... don't mind me :) I just haven't had a coffee yet... :)

06 June 2008, 10:57 AM
rofl, have coffee you must :wise:

06 June 2008, 08:21 PM
WOW!! Kapa dolje!

Kako si rigao ovog starkelju,, facialna animacija je prejebena,, to su morph targeti, ili neki rig za lice,, u svakom slucaju, jako zanimljivo.:thumbsup:

06 June 2008, 07:08 AM
tnx AIR!

i do facial riggs just with simple helpers affecting parts of the face..then i combine that with a few morph targets that i use mostly for mouth ( doing the b, m, p ) and eyes. when you animate all that, u get more natural and nonlinear i used a lot of noise controllers on top of almost every helper's position or rotation.. =))

07 July 2008, 06:05 PM
Impressive work! Congratulations on the win!

07 July 2008, 06:28 PM
Congrats!! GREAT work. I KNEW this deserved to be up there; I would say even first place. Keep up the Great work. :-)

07 July 2008, 06:33 PM
Svaka čast čovječe da te nisam vidio na listi nagrađenih nikad više nebi CGTalku platio članarinu! ČESTITAM!

All kudos man if you were not on the winning list i would not pay any further subscriptions to CGSociety! CONGRATULITIONS!

P.S. O ovome bi trebalo izvjestiti i domaće medije....

07 July 2008, 09:29 AM
Nije MASTER PRIZE! Mamuim... ccc... Evo sad sam se toliko uzrujao da sam odmah poceo lokalno... :)

Congratulations Ducky :)

07 July 2008, 09:57 AM
Congratulations! Well Done!

07 July 2008, 02:26 PM
:) tnx people!

hej hrc ma nemoj da se uzbudjavash, ja hepi : ))

Nenad thank you once again :)

07 July 2008, 04:44 PM
Twisted, scary, beautiful piece.


07 July 2008, 02:57 AM
Totally awesome dude...It's also cool to see that one of the winning entries utilized themes from the actual Uplift Universe book series (the dolphin guys). Great job!

07 July 2008, 03:40 AM
Hey congrats!
Great effort!Push the limits more in the upcoming challenges!

07 July 2008, 05:28 PM
congrats man!

still looking forward to a version with audio.. : )

07 July 2008, 11:30 PM
Hi guys, thank you all very much :)

btw, the sound version will come one day i hope, i plan to make a HD render still resting from everything...tho i could speed it up and do a funny version with benny hill music :D

09 September 2008, 08:34 PM
here's the PG-13 version link (


09 September 2008, 08:55 PM
VERY slow download, but worth the wait! Laughed so hard, very funny, well done.

09 September 2008, 09:08 PM

lololol, it works great with music,
now go make some sound effects :)


09 September 2008, 08:35 AM
lol thank you guys! :D this is just something i had to do : )) i plan to do a longer version later..more serious and with sound :)

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