View Full Version : New dialogue shot (blocking)

04 April 2008, 10:57 AM
Hello everyone,

I have started a new dialogue shot and would like to get some feedback on it. Any comments/suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you

UPDATE: just noticed the link was broken sorry about that.

04 April 2008, 08:21 AM
Hi Chris,

This is pretty good start. Nice dialogue , nicely blocked. Few suggestions to improve, but these could be personal choices, so u can ignore if u wish . probably start doing the 'taking out the specs' action a bit earlier and then do the gesture to emphasize the words 'never seen....' Right now the actions are exactly timed on the change of sentences.
I think it would be great to also see the candidate's reaction at the end.
Keep up the good work.


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