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maykrender
03 March 2008, 11:33 PM
Michal Lisowski is entered in the "Uplift Universe Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/view_entries.php?challenger=14742)

Latest Update: Final Image: Uplift
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1210238594_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5137167#post5137167)

maykrender
03 March 2008, 04:49 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206463737_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206463737_large.jpg)

Hi all,
recent stuff, concept of the story. I want to create something like arrival of the alien civ, who leads the process with unflat of the planet ;) or something like the Copernicus of N' century ;)

Comms most welcome, feel fre :)

maykrender
03 March 2008, 11:18 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206573434_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206573434_large.jpg)

Color conception, You can rotate it as you wish ;)

C&C guys, C&C.. ;)

Nickillus
03 March 2008, 12:23 AM
Great start Michal. Looks like a fascinating idea already.

azazel
03 March 2008, 08:52 AM
It's great already :)

KangarooMan
03 March 2008, 10:18 AM
Great looking concept, I really like the colors that you have in there!

Matt :)

LightSovereign
03 March 2008, 10:55 AM
beautifully rich illustration already..the upside down version gives me a little vertigo to be honest :D

Great start

Marley

JTD
03 March 2008, 11:06 AM
This is a clever idea and I love your quick brushwork.

Nomad
03 March 2008, 11:07 AM
Hej fajne! :thumbsup:

Great start Michał :thumbsup: this is a cool upside down piece you have here :D

maykrender
03 March 2008, 11:56 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206748593_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1206748593_large.jpg)

Some changes in composition, I have expanded canvas. As you see, appeared new hexagon on the grass ;)

C&C most welcome, as always :)

LightSovereign
03 March 2008, 03:24 AM
the expo on the canvas has done wonders for the composition..still beautifull colours.

No real crits of value..except easthetically you could place ship like shapes in the cloud..(top right i mean) :D.

Fantastic

Marley

morganvillette
03 March 2008, 09:06 PM
Nice work! I like to viewing angle!
Very interresting scene!

Good luck!!

Multiductus
04 April 2008, 03:02 PM
Great concept, it's a powerful scene.

Squibbit
04 April 2008, 07:56 PM
hey i just figured out whats goin in the pic :P

cool stuff dude :thumbsup:



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alexichabane
04 April 2008, 03:01 PM
Nice use of colour and lighting. I like the hexagon panels, it would be cool if they continued into the ladscape (on soil and rocks), to give the idea that it is a fully manufactured landscape. Great start though, keep it up.

OZ
04 April 2008, 03:41 PM
Fantastic scene! the most first thing "I FEEL" is the strong prospective...beautiful.

Neubius
04 April 2008, 04:46 PM
superb. the mood you've got here is amazing.

love it

BLX
04 April 2008, 05:50 PM
That's a really cool concept you got there. I like the color that you have used and the flip is sweet. Good luck!

pixemo
04 April 2008, 08:11 PM
very cool idea, and well executed... Are you going to have some creatures on the underside?

maykrender
04 April 2008, 12:45 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207269916_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207269916_large.jpg)

Changed some colours, add some details on background.
C&C as always, most welcome!

Thanks everybody for support!!!

maykrender
04 April 2008, 10:30 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207607428_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207607428_large.jpg)

Hi all,
I'm still working with sky, try to add more colors, more life to this piece.

C&C always most welcome!

beelow
04 April 2008, 06:09 AM
I think the dutch angle may be too extreme for my taste. But, I will give it my stamp of approval. I love the color choices. Good luck with your entry. :thumbsup:

maykrender
04 April 2008, 09:52 AM
Beelow, you're right. Actually I'm working on it, try to rotate left upper part of this piece, hope it helps. Thanks!

maykrender
04 April 2008, 11:56 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207958202_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1207958202_large.jpg)

Conception of teleport and gravity fix, in closeup.

C&C guys, C&C ;)

stridiggio
04 April 2008, 12:24 AM
wow, is a good point of view... i like the colors, the concept,,,the camera,,
i saw that the perspective between the grass (up) and the floor of wood (down) is not linear, have a little angle of desplacement to the left, but don't believe me..maybe you do this to have more impact! congratulations,,,i'll see the progress!!

man-to
04 April 2008, 05:03 PM
hey Michal! very good so far, horizon suggests much dynamism, so maybe you should add something (storm?) to bring even more dynamism. I like the relation between group and the one with hand raised.

Jaba153
04 April 2008, 03:27 AM
very very nice image the paint ,colors ,camera angle are superb!!beautiful!

maykrender
04 April 2008, 09:16 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1208812576_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1208812576_large.jpg)

Thanks guys for support!

Working with details...

MiguelCBT
04 April 2008, 09:44 PM
Great composition and color palette! :thumbsup:

Klasz
04 April 2008, 10:25 PM
great concept
it tells a real story.

and super expression.
i just wish you have time to finish.

maykrender
04 April 2008, 10:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1209421530_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1209421530_large.jpg)

Invert piece this time, cause actually i.m working hard with "mechanical" part of this stuff, coloring, details etc. you know..

C&C are moooost welcome!!!

maykrender
05 May 2008, 10:36 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1209940563_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1209940563_large.jpg)

I think it's almost finished. I have changed some details like grass, clouds, machine... lighting, have to add some things and it will be done (barbarians ;/)

cheers!

PS. If you have any suggestion, just feel free!

walrus
05 May 2008, 11:00 PM
This is really interesting! I'm not entirely sure what's going on, but I like it. The perspective is dizzying, the palette is nice, and I love that light coming through the clouds! The one part I think isn't working so well for me is how the chost figure is positioned directly behind the corporeal figure so that his heas is superimposed with the other figure's rear end. I liked the earlier version of the composition where the solid figure was more to the right of the host because both read as sepearte figures better.

The figure coming up from the bottom - it that a "ghost" or another actual person? He's pale like the ghost/hologram, but seems to be lacking in clothing details I would expect from a real human.

But anyhow, good luck on the last finishes.

maykrender
05 May 2008, 09:23 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1210238594_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/14742/14742_1210238594_large.jpg)

I think it's done. maybe in near future I will do some changes, add some details..4 days to deadline, so who knows..;)

Thank everybody for comments!

Neubius
05 May 2008, 10:07 AM
excellent piece mate.


good luck!

lynch
05 May 2008, 05:49 PM
very nice concept ....i cant decide wich layout i like best, i hope you can , theone dated on the 4th reads best to me though its easier to tell whats happening on the rother side of the sky.

TheoChron
05 May 2008, 09:53 AM
Great concept my friend. Very original. Good luck with this!!!

My Uplift Image (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5146047#post5146047)

man-to
05 May 2008, 01:02 PM
Hey Mayk, powodzenia :) Not much changed since last update, good that you've chosen this version (vertical flip is not better I think).

Jassar
05 May 2008, 02:56 PM
wow! your painting skills are great :) , funny I haven't seen this thread before now.
Good luck with the challenge.

KOryH
05 May 2008, 02:12 AM
super cool. I love the perspective and the painting.
great job!

maykrender
05 May 2008, 10:23 AM
Neubius, alarihos, KOryH, Jassar - thanks, and vice-versa good luck guys

lynch - thanks, iI decided that one cause I think it's more readable.

mant-Raz - as I said, I hope that was good choice. Thanks homie for posting here

nwiz25
05 May 2008, 03:35 PM
absolutely spellbinding!! :eek: love the camera angle man! congratulations!! :applause:

maykrender
05 May 2008, 12:36 PM
nwiz25 - thanks mate, glad you like it :)

asparta
06 June 2008, 10:03 PM
hah..that's great idea for composition....great angle of view, and great sence for materials. Congratulations.

morganvillette
06 June 2008, 01:04 PM
Love colors and scene! Very nice work!

BaronImpossible
06 June 2008, 09:09 PM
I'm glad this placed - it's a fascinating picture that's brilliantly painted. Well done :thumbsup:

walrus
06 June 2008, 03:41 AM
Really beautiful piece (as I said earlier! :) ) Congrats on your honorable mention, nice work! Hope to see you in a future Challenge!

nwiz25
06 June 2008, 07:46 AM
hey dude! congratulations on your honorable mention! :bounce: :p :scream: a very cool piece indeed! looking forward to seeing you in the next challenge! :p

MartinNielsen
06 June 2008, 08:51 AM
Good ranking :) Congrats.

Neubius
06 June 2008, 09:33 AM
congrats man, worthy recognition :) excellent!


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OmeN2501
06 June 2008, 09:49 AM
Wicked picture man, WICKED! Idea is simply brilliant followed up by neat execution and style. For me the most original piece of entire challenge

Dragneye
06 June 2008, 02:48 AM
A beautiful pic and an interesting perspective. Congrats.

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