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02 February 2008, 02:18 AM
Hello CGTalk, I hardly post but I have decided to try and enter the War!

I'll be posting some stuff soon hopefully, I have a few ideas that i need to zone in.

Character:Warlord Paroxysm,
Class: Warlord
Artifact:Summoner, Gauntlets and Crown/Helmet

Character outline:This character Paroxysm, is from an alien world within our own galaxy, advanced insect/ anphibion type race.

Paroxysm has 3 enchanted items wich make a full set, her crown/helmet and gauntlets
these items allow her to summon a paranormal type strength , sight and speed.
Energy fills her body making in very durable. During its summon ghost type arms made of pure energy that allow her to have super strength and pick up things 100 times her weight wich also allows her to dual weild oversized scyths. The crown and guantlets were forged out of a skull and carapace of a magical god type bean wich self sacrficed to aid in this war and dark time. paroxysm is the brawler / warrior of her special unit.

02 February 2008, 05:40 AM
just a quick rough i did to get an idea down for process.

02 February 2008, 06:03 AM
great sketch and pose, clearly a very powerfull character, and i love the Ghost arms, however i do find it a little hard to tell that the character is female. it reads more like a Skinny LOTR Orc to me.
maybe a close-up of the head and upper body would make it more clear?

02 February 2008, 08:35 AM
Cool sketch, the pose looks powerful.

02 February 2008, 11:12 AM
woo, looks sweet with those "ethereal" gauntlets. I can second scudz, but other than that not much to crit.GL!

02 February 2008, 04:13 PM
Thanks guys!, Ill work on it a bit to make it more female, I think cleaning up the silhouette will help we shall see what i can do on a tighter sketch.

02 February 2008, 05:02 PM
your sketch has a good shape and a good flow to it. May be hard to dual wield sickles though. keep us posted

02 February 2008, 06:59 PM
love the helmet and the floating weapons but its hard to tell that is a female

02 February 2008, 06:21 AM
I pulled it all together a bit and took in some advice on a few things and ended up with this..

I'm gonna do a color study for future referance on the illustration for later on ,which will be posted next.

hope ya like !

03 March 2008, 01:34 AM
Just a rough color pass i kinda liked for when i do the final illustration its kinda cobra commander ha unno i will try some variations..

03 March 2008, 01:47 AM
definalty more femanine, and not ridiculously proportioned either.
i can't say i'm crazy about the colour scheme, but it still looks amazing. maybe try a couple variations?

03 March 2008, 02:28 AM
Yea the colors are a bit punched but i was just playin around with a real insecty thing, still playing with it alot and will post all the roughs I test.
Been workin on the rest of the b&g stuff for the model sheet not to mention how I want the face to open ugh...

thanks for the feedback though

03 March 2008, 06:29 AM
ditto about the colours.

I love the forms running through the top half, mayble imploy some of those hard edges in the bottom half too?

03 March 2008, 06:35 AM

i'm alright with the colors, but they aren't entirely 'cgsociety' recognizable.

Still, nice pic.

03 March 2008, 06:43 AM
The colour scheme is beautiful. Really nice shapes, the thing I like about this is that you've made an armoured figure but managed to make it different from the run of the mill stuff. Nice work.

03 March 2008, 07:09 PM
a rough color pass? awesome thats all i have to say

03 March 2008, 12:19 PM
its a really nice work, i like your technique.

03 March 2008, 01:03 PM
That's a very cool idea. Nice form too. I really like this one. Are you going to be making additional poses or is this just your concept sheet?

04 April 2008, 09:44 AM color~

i like it

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