View Full Version : flour sack jump WIP

02 February 2008, 08:08 PM
pretty rough work in progress but thought I'd post it for critique.
hes jumping off a diving board but I havent animated the board yet.

02 February 2008, 04:24 PM
the animation of the sand bag looks reall good the only crit i would have is the pose at the very end however since it's still work in progress i asume that that pose is going to introduce a little characteristic to the sand bag.

i love the anticipation when the bag hits the board.

what's interesting about your animation, is the fact that i didn't have to really see what he is bouncing off of to know that it's a diving board.

great job can't wait to see it done. :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

02 February 2008, 06:03 PM
you need to be clear with your actions. One at a time.
Add holds inbetween your actions dont confuse your audience.

And exgerrate all your timings. Make the parts that are suppose to be slow, like the anticipations and hang time very slow and speed up the fast parts, like when the rice sack falls.

Dont be afraid to draw many frames for even the slightest movement.

You are diffenetly going in the right direction, keep it up.

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