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02 February 2008, 02:30 PM
hi everyone i'm very excited about participating in this war . i'm now at a concept stage still but i will post something soon.
I dividied my work as follows:
1 week : concept
2-4 week : modelling
5-6 week: texturing
7 week: composition and rendering

Class: Warlord or Stalker

Artifact Weapon:Earth/Rock


02 February 2008, 06:54 PM
buddy nice plan of attack can't wait to see your concepts I know you will rock

02 February 2008, 12:18 PM
Hello to all GC Warriors!
I've ended the high level project stage and I'm interested in your opinion about my work! For me it's time for modelling. Cheers to all participants and all supporters

02 February 2008, 05:12 PM
Hi Daniel. I like your concept...He looks very strong and skilful:thumbsup:

02 February 2008, 06:07 PM
awsome concept :)

02 February 2008, 12:07 AM
Hey Daniel really nice concept looking forward to see next stage

02 February 2008, 05:51 PM
Hello to all GC Warriors!
the first step
Cheers to all participants and all supporters and thanks for supporting in the fight

02 February 2008, 02:59 AM
Concept look very good. He definitely can rule the worlds. Good luck :thumbsup:.

02 February 2008, 09:29 AM
good job :) especially i like hands, send some close views of them, and other views

03 March 2008, 12:42 AM
Hey everybody
Here's this weeks assignment. :):):)
Please let me know what do you think.
It's still in progress so without details, but I'm working with body now.

Just great to be able to count on you for comments!


03 March 2008, 12:50 AM
Hmm just a few comments, I would smooth out the transaction between each muscle because the creases are too deep, especially around his shoulder. The shoulder area needs a bit more work I think and the eyes need loads of work. The eyes are very important, right now they are super slanted. But overall, great start and I hope to see more updates.

03 March 2008, 09:03 PM
next step modeling -tomorrow to job images/icons/icon9.gif

03 March 2008, 11:05 PM
great progress buddy cant wait to see finished model the only area that bugs me a little is lower abdominal but i know you probably still working on it

03 March 2008, 10:52 AM
thx for your support guys abs are not finished yet
i will try to post some more updated version later in the week

03 March 2008, 07:04 PM
it looks great :)

- Upper arm muscle looks strange (it loks like lower part is to big in compere to upper part of it).
- Abdomen muscle looks very strange to me.
- Overlall waist is to thin in and elbows looks way to masive :), but maybe u wanted it like that.

good work man :)

03 March 2008, 08:18 PM
Small update -This wing is still WIP tomorrow i finish
thanks Loukor and spawn0 for suggestions

03 March 2008, 01:42 PM
Hello Geru
You have nice concept sketches.
I've only one suggestion - his wings could be a little bigger, so he would look more powerfull i think.
Nice to see you here on the battlefield. Good luck!

03 March 2008, 09:41 AM
hey - nice concept... look forward to seeing more...

One crit - other than the anatomy crits so far... the head looks stretched in the Y - kinda too long... dunno if that's intentional - but not really workin for me... Anyways - i'll keep following the thread and see where u go with this.

All the best and keep up the work!

03 March 2008, 01:01 AM
hey evryone, i'm working with my wings now, and i 'm looking for the best arc line and anatomy, this is still in progres but the problem is that it's a big man so he needs big well done wings :)

03 March 2008, 12:21 PM
hey nice update wings looks nice but now show me some more definined body cant wait for next update

03 March 2008, 11:49 PM
Small update .now i think is time for detail

03 March 2008, 12:07 AM
hey looking pretty cool man, like the detail in the wings

03 March 2008, 01:33 AM
Hey man... kool to see you're progressing...
I think the skin on the top of the wing looks kinda wierd and out of place though... why would there be skin there like that? The wrinkles on the wings looks a bit too busy as well... think about making more "hero" wrinkles and some smaller supporting ones instead of covering the whole thing so evenly...Also think about adding some wear and tears on the wings. As to the guy - I'm still not quite diggin the face - still looks stretched to me.
Anyways - keep up the work man! Lookin forward to seein more.


03 March 2008, 06:09 PM
hey man
great update proportions i see you've corrected proportions finally and they work great there are just 2 areas that i think are not working right now first are the wings i totally don't like their shape right now and for me they more decorative right now then functional i don't think that i this placement they could actually support him in the fly
second area is a arms i think that your brachialis muscel in arms is a to small and the ams looks kinda strange from front view
great progress


03 March 2008, 05:30 PM
great modeling work so far...:thumbsup: proportions are fine for me.. the wings looks great, it looked a bit little in the concept, but now it seems that these can support him.

03 March 2008, 09:23 PM
Hey, guys this is my next update for this work, of course it's still in progress ,
For now I'm working with attachment and details of bottom character's part.
Thanks for comments,

03 March 2008, 09:30 PM
Hey Does anyone know how can i chang post title?

03 March 2008, 12:44 PM
small updata

03 March 2008, 12:51 PM
The twisted demonic Mongol looks real sweet! Can't wait to see you texture this!

03 March 2008, 02:17 AM
It's really nice to see your progress with this work, Just awesome job!one of the most "well done" i saw around .
have a great weekimages/icons/icon7.gif

03 March 2008, 03:45 AM
Looking cool. You may want to make sure you don't have too much high frequency detail or it may end up looking like niose on the character. I really like the feel of the boots. The just look heavy.

03 March 2008, 05:29 PM
Wow great update it really starts to look very powerful and mighty
but the shader on the body looks a little bit stange or maybe the detail i a little bit to big any way great work so far can't wait to see the textures

03 March 2008, 07:18 PM
Looking good. Nice work with the cgs logo. Overall the character works really well, nothing specific to crit at all. Looking forward to see how the lowpoly works.
One tiny crit might be pretty much what jbrophy said, specially with the wings it might look nice to have some larger foldings and not just small uniform sized ones.

03 March 2008, 07:50 PM
If you make his chest smooth it will be a resting area for the eye. It will enhance your model tremendously. Great Job!

03 March 2008, 03:08 PM
Hey, you.

As someone said before the upper part looks a bit noisy. Prolly because of this scratched_metal material, but since it`s gonna be textured it shouldn`t be a problem, right? :)

I`m not the biggest fan of you character`s head style, but I know you and if you`ve decided that it should look just like this I won`t even try to convince you ;)

See ya ;)

03 March 2008, 01:15 AM
Guys Thanks for your comments it was really helpful, There are still some place for finishing but I'll do it just before burning normals ,because there are a little time :) I hope they'll change date;D, So I start normalllllllllllllllllsssssssssimages/icons/icon10.gif
The holes in wings and skirt I'll do with alpha
take care

03 March 2008, 02:00 AM
very nice details i like the belt are and the wicked details on the face

03 March 2008, 02:07 PM
nice man now he looks mighty and powerful I like new wing much better
can't wait to see low poly and textures
see ya

03 March 2008, 12:20 PM
Daniel there is a little time so I hope you go forward I wait for next step.
I like his face he's just sexy :)

03 March 2008, 06:19 AM
Hey man this really came together, nice job on it! waiting for the game res

04 April 2008, 02:59 AM
there is a little time but I mobilized myself and I have finished LP.
now i hope after drinking a lot of coffee , i'll succeed in finishing my model .
Right now I have 9400 tris 400 yeah too much.
thanks everybody for help and comments it was appreciate to work with you guys


04 April 2008, 09:21 AM
i think that wings should be much bigger, becouse body looks very havy, and thosw wings couldnt cary him,
look how birds wings are big in compare to their body


04 April 2008, 10:47 AM
any progress there? :)

04 April 2008, 05:20 PM
Great character!
Have you finish?

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