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02 February 2008, 12:54 PM
Trying to define my char yet.

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02 February 2008, 05:57 PM
As my concept to 3d is too cutie, for 2d I'm gonna make something more MACHO. A warlord, that uses darkness/void as his power. I started making some sketches, they depic an angel that has a silhuette based on the shape of lucifer's head (the first on left upper corner) and some variations. What do you guys think?

02 February 2008, 09:16 PM
I´m wainting to see more images !
Good luck

02 February 2008, 09:28 PM
hey man, loved the last one (botton right side), that caotic wings looking great and around the shoulders and neck i like the "spikes" look like dephormed arms for me.
keep it up, want to see more!

02 February 2008, 02:57 PM
Thanks for your comments, fellows, and sorry for the late reply. Do two entries for the same contest is a bit of madness from me.. But I'm trying to make it.

There goes another drawing. This is not exactly what I'm looking for, but is some direction, anyway.

02 February 2008, 05:00 PM
This is something that fits best with my conception of this char. It resembles a bird, a bird of prey. I wish he looks savage, curvy, sharp, a bit disgusting to look at, a threat. A kind of creature that defeats an enemie wildly and after the enemy's death, he eats his flesh, like the old and good cannibal indians. I thought that his weapon could absorve the powers of his enemy, so eating his enemy's body could be a way to absorve his powers too. Of course he couldn't eat his enemys made of metal tough.. :P

Or maybe his weapon could send his enemy souls to the absolute void, and eliminate tehm from existence. Again this is not applied against machines...

There goes the concepts, anyway. Crits and comments, please.

02 February 2008, 07:33 PM
Hei, nice to see you here, bro.

I like the concept so far, and i'm waiting the new ones.

See ya!!

02 February 2008, 03:06 AM
Thanks, Alex. I wasn't happy with the angel, so I decided to experiment new ideas. This one looks good to me. A woman with very thin and flexible stalks on her back. she can manipulate them mentaly, and made them assume a desired shape of big arms. There are two carnivorous plants growing from her back too. Simple an idea, but I like the overall shape. C&C please.

02 February 2008, 06:52 PM
I've made a quick 3d model of my previous concept, to help me to visualize if it looks good on 3d. Now I'm trying to define her clothes. Everytihng I'm trying is looking too cliche, so, any sugestion is apreciated.

03 March 2008, 04:35 AM
Hey jramauri. Good to see you here too! I´m in the war now!

Interesting concepts, but i don´t like very much those big hands... I would give it a second tought...

03 March 2008, 05:28 PM
Thanks Carlos. In fact I left this concept behind. I'm thinking in a new char with power based on light, now. As I'm working for both 2d and 3d entries, I'm not having time to develop him better at this moment, but I'm going to finish both, be sure.

03 March 2008, 09:39 PM
Butterfly woman? :)

Is too simple yet. I believe that this caracter could have more details! :)

(fala, amauri, me diz uma coisa: eu nao estou sabendo postar minhas imagens, estou usando o post do proprio site. tem alguma regra quanto a isso? eu estou vendo que os seus posts ficam iguais os do challenge. vc que altera o seu primeiro post?
Vale eu usar meu proprio site pra postar imagens, ou nao existe regras de post nesse? nao achei nenhuma regra que especifique isso!)

good job!

03 March 2008, 12:02 PM
Hey, Tabajara.

Because of time constraints, I believe I won't be able to try new things on this topic. I must to focus in just one entry, to be sure I'm going to finish, and it seems the 3d piece is developing much better. So I'll bet everything on it. I wish I could make both, but unfortunately I have to make this choice :(

Eu te respondi sobre a postagem de imagens no meu tópico 3d. É igual no 3d4all, vc usa tags [img] e o endereço da sua imagem, no seu site, ou em um de hospedagem, tipo o ( Repare que na parte de cima do editor de mensagem aqui do CGS tem aquele icone de paisagem, igual no 3d4all, pra vc colocar o endereço da imagem. Não tem erro.

Tem gente que edita o primeiro post sempre que coloca algo novo. O meu sistema é colocar uma imagem chamada last_update.jpg no meu servidor e no primeiro post, igual a ultima postada. Aí ela já muda automaticamente ;)

Abração e valeu pela força.

The Flork
03 March 2008, 05:53 PM
Neat! cool concept! :-D the only thing is the pant elemnts are all just on the back, like they where just slaped on. I dont feel a concetion between the girl and the plant. you should make all of her clothes outta the plant so it looks like more a part of her. Even just giving her green clothes wouldl help :-D

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