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jgb
04 April 2003, 09:29 PM
here is my last pic... to enjoy you all... some really gay stuff.
comments, laughs on how much gay is the guy, and critics are welcome.:bounce:
http://rgba.planet-d.net/pwyll/adamoneden.jpg

bumskee
04 April 2003, 11:27 PM
g'day,

errrr..nice....
did you use photoshop to paint that?

i won't comment on gayness of the pic. :rolleyes:
but i will say, maybe you can soften the edges on the background tree.

:beer:

jgb
04 April 2003, 11:34 PM
bumskee, i used photoshop and painter, but the hard work was done on painter, i only used photoshop for some tricks...

and first the edges were blurrier, but i thought they didn't not work quite well, at least i didn't like the way they were, so i painted a hard edge for them... but i realize it could be better...

thanks :wavey:

Derlaine
04 April 2003, 02:08 AM
deleted text because i can't delete the post

Alevice
04 April 2003, 03:35 AM
That looks more like a forest of evil than a celestial garden...

It is still nice tho.

Rey
04 April 2003, 03:54 AM
Nice detail in the foreground.
The background is just a little too hard and flat.
A little more atmosphere in the far background would really help.

Looking good though.

Man
04 April 2003, 05:12 AM
there's something wrong with his leg

jgb
04 April 2003, 09:42 AM
thank you all.

derlaine: what do you mean with pec? i didn't understand that.

alevice: yes, maybe you're right, next time i draw an eden pic will be brighter.... and maybe some fruits could help...

rey: i wanted to make the background less detailed that the foreground, but i see it has come too flat...

knoxville: maybe the lighting makes you misunderstand the figure, but i did around 5 or 6 previous studies of the figure before draw it in the pic, the bad thing is that i had to make the guy in a morning, to reach a deadline of a competition.... so i had no time to make the guy better. next time maybe i'll have more time for that....

thanks:thumbsup:

megra
04 April 2003, 02:54 PM
pec=pectoral. its a chest muscle.

M.Rogne
04 April 2003, 04:47 PM
Hehe... Looks nice to me, but perhaps it would've been better if it was Eva on Eden ? -.-''
Anyway, the dense forest doesn't remind me too much of the Garden of Eden.

jgb
04 April 2003, 06:54 PM
thanks megra.

mr. rogne, who knows how was the garden of eden? :D

Alevice
04 April 2003, 10:16 PM
Well it was supposed to be a Garden after all, so maybe to accomplish the garden feeling you should try to make a tad bit less trees. A lot of trees get the feeling of a forest. ;P

=)

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