01 January 2002, 07:21 PM
Hey there. Overall I think it was kinda cool.
The story didn't seem to be very well developed at the end. It started off pretty cool, but after a while you stop understanding what's going on.
I think that most of the animation needs to be worked on. I understood what was going on because of sound effects rather than because the motion was properly done. Btw, the sound and music was cool.
Lastly, I found there where alot of unecessary camera angles. Not bad cuts, so much as bad angles. When choosing your camera angles you should try to use them to tell the story first, then worry about them looking cool or interesting. Anyway, congrats
01 January 2006, 01:26 AM
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