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11 November 2007, 03:08 AM
Here is the 7th out of 7 for the new reel. You know the drill and thanks in advance for any crits.

11 November 2007, 07:27 PM
Hey there,

I would work on the first initial post that we see. It is a little symetrical does not have as much weight as it could. You may want to favor the hips more over one of the feet and get some torque in his spine. So the hips chest and head are not all facing the same direction. It may also help if you only have him standing still for 4-6 frames instead of a second. Or if you want him thinking there give him some subtle motion once you tweak the pose.

Also you may want to do another pass looking at the overlap. Sometimes the wrists don't seems to be hitting it at the correct time. For example around frame 50 the Right wrist has no overlap. Just a little would add to that and after that around 72 the right wrist is really flaoting around. You may want to work on a few stong poses in there and then do some ease in and out.

Hope that helps some. I'm sure it will turn out to be a nice piece for your reel.

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