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10 October 2007, 11:11 AM
Hi , this is an animation i've just done, any crits are welcome :) (

10 October 2007, 02:44 PM
"befriend not found" :(

10 October 2007, 04:27 PM
sorry, the link works now.

10 October 2007, 04:58 PM
Hey serguineh,

The facial stuff looks really good. You should try to push the body motion a LOT more. I would have his hands clenched, his back arched, his whole body in a rage. Then, when he switches his stance and steps forward, keep him upright. That will help follow the VO and push the "acting" a bit more.

Good start.

10 October 2007, 11:37 PM
Hi serguineh,

I'm not very fond of your blendshapes. I would like to see the mouth open up more when he says "pompous" and "completely," but I believe your timing is spot on. Good job!


10 October 2007, 05:01 AM
Thank's ankheilw , tjc19999 for your critics now I realise what is missing.

10 October 2007, 09:06 AM
I have pushed the acting a little bit and corrected the lipsync too. any other ideas don't hesitate.

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