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Viper-Designer
04 April 2003, 07:31 AM
Hey i need some opinions guys

http://www30.brinkster.com/viperrecon/cgtalk/Nieuw%20-%20Tekstdocument.html

they're not done though but i want to hear your opinions etc.
thnx everybody :)

Mananetwork
04 April 2003, 04:40 PM
Increase the opacity of the border outlines in the words.
Just to make word stand out a bit more

Nyl
04 April 2003, 04:45 PM
hey,nice job
keep up the good work

bumskee
04 April 2003, 11:39 PM
absolutely agree with mamanetwork, it's nice effect though!
is it just a radial blur mainly??

Viper-Designer
04 April 2003, 06:07 AM
yep i blured it a few times, duplicated the layer and changed the opacity a bit, then i added some effects in the background

Ghostever
04 April 2003, 03:01 PM
Mmm..
nice work.but i'm thinking of that it would be better if u increase the contrast degree of the whole scene.it can make ur concept more clearly.

Viper-Designer
04 April 2003, 03:22 PM
thnx for the tips guys ill try them as soon as my host is back online :surprised

Screwball
04 April 2003, 09:42 AM
its cooooooooooool!!!
very nice web!

Viper-Designer
04 April 2003, 09:48 AM
Now that my host is back online I'll be uploading some of my work soon be sure to check it out too!!!

kezz
04 April 2003, 05:04 PM
hi guys...

ahh... i think its a nice idea... but the picture is a little bit to boring in my opinion...
the picture would look more intresting if you put some lightning effect in it... or some other effect, perhaps you could also animate it?

Viper-Designer
04 April 2003, 07:35 AM
do you mean animate it in flash? nice idea though :thumbsup:

kezz
04 April 2003, 03:21 PM
you needn't
you can do it with imageready too! :)

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