View Full Version : im new- some critics please!!!

04 April 2002, 04:25 PM

this is my first try to paint a pic in photoshop. so come on let me know what you think.

04 April 2002, 04:30 PM
no textures and reference material used

04 April 2002, 04:31 PM
more details

04 April 2002, 04:45 PM
Looks nice. You should try putting some background and foreground elements in there - seems a bit flat at the moment

04 April 2002, 05:36 PM
I like the pinup girl at the airplane.. :)

Add a background

04 April 2002, 06:14 PM
thanx for the critics. this pic is still in progress. and yes, i will add a background.


04 April 2002, 12:04 AM
Hey! I like the concept. Would love to see this done in 3D. I think it would have been a good one for last months WIP CHallenge. :D

04 April 2002, 12:12 AM
I don't know what your background will be but I think a siloette(spelled right?) of a bunch of arab-type buildings like something found in Aladdin with a orange-ish sunset would look great. Also, I think everything especcially the animal and the plane need some type of highlights. You already have some but I think ou need some that really make things jump off the animal's legs, face. Also, try making a texture for the animal in another painting and then bring it into this picture as a multiply layer.....textures on it would really make it look great. Keep us updated!

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