Lost Adventurer, Aleks Kirilenko (3D)
LC #42 Pipers Alley

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04-30-2007, 10:41 PM
Comments and crits?
This is half way in about, I wanted to get some feedback.

05-01-2007, 12:20 AM
interesting concept and dramatical mood, I like this, it looks lord of the rings style, I see some issues on the foreground,, it looks too perfect too digital, I can see the 3D there and the texture is kind of wrong in its porojection, the right cloud loks too painted as well, other than that it is a nice piece.

05-01-2007, 01:54 AM

Yeh agree with everthing Jaime said.

The left forground looks interesting. Might be good to add something that give a sense of scale maybe. Also needs a stronger focal point perhaps, something to lead the eye towards, a castle or some structure. The planet could do with been more in the frame. It also looks like you might have used a procedural noise for the bump map, procedurals never look great, try using a texture based bump. Also using some kind of ambient occlusion / global illuminaton pass can help create realistic shadows. Overall looking good :thumbsup:

- Dave.

05-01-2007, 10:22 AM
Great image

I think thereís any issue with the distance from the crater "I think thatís what it is" and the mountains. As they only seem to be a few hundred meters away from each other, which would make the mountains look a lot bigger,try using some fog/mist for more depth.

Plus show some clouds around the mountains etc and snowcaps.

05-18-2007, 03:22 AM
Ah its been a while here but I'm still pluggin away. Still trying to get that pro look to it.

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