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04 April 2007, 08:29 AM
Hi, everyone
I'm looking for ways on improving my Animation reel. So if I could get some advice that would be great?

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Cesar Ploneda

04 April 2007, 06:48 PM
so far so good .... i do think the break dancing part.. could be less floaty ... meaning maybe when he comes down have less slow in it looks to even there,,,... also the walk cycle with the guy walking, and his hands are flipping out all crazy,,, tone that down a bit,.. its jsut too much.. maybe if he was walking faster..

05 May 2007, 01:55 AM
hey man...
i agree with radio spank...i think you should adjust the curve on the breakdancer when he comes down...his legs seems a bit floaty too, when they're spinning
demo reel wise...i like the song..maybe with the could maybe sync the steps with the music beats.

05 May 2007, 01:54 AM
I like this one, the music is simple and the animations are pretty solid. I like the four legged run, very difficult to properly pull off. Your bicycle animation is a little iffy though, it looks like it's looping a bit funny. Kudos

05 May 2007, 08:25 AM
short but sweet i didnt find much wrong with any of it apart from whats already been said with the slight floating.. as for the hands in the walk cycle the animation comes with the character i dont think he was going to realism.

p.s loved the bloodsport video, very amusing :thumbsup:

05 May 2007, 10:34 AM

i also agree with radio spank, however i do like the character leaping at the end of you reel.
you are not far of, just need polishing.

all the best

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