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04 April 2007, 03:14 AM

Title: Smile
Name: Kenichi Makino
Country: Japan
Software: 3ds max, finalRender, Photoshop

This is a character I made recently.
I want to express a natural smiling face.

modeled and rendered by 3ds max
texture and postwork made with photoshop
background made with Terragen2

I hope you like it.Thank you for viewing.

04 April 2007, 08:25 AM
well her smile is sweet...

but her hair is not realisitc.....and i guess more work is needed on the background as well....

04 April 2007, 09:28 AM
The hair is really odd. Is it max hair??? Maybe u could use more than 1 pass for hair render.

05 May 2007, 12:32 AM
Its really a nice render..Soft texturing which is looking good..In mu humble opinion some parts below and around eye can be improved..As well as lips..Hairs can also be improved..Give them some shine which can bring those into life..Take carez..All the best..Cheers:)

05 May 2007, 02:52 PM
Hello all, thank you for comments and critiques.They are very helpful for me.
I understood there is a problem about hair, eye, etc.
First of all, I will make an effort to improve hair, later I want to show the result.:)

05 May 2007, 09:57 AM
Hello, I corrected hair.Here I show it.
Comments and critiques are welcomed.

05 May 2007, 05:03 AM
Close-up of her face here.

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