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03 March 2007, 02:12 AM

Hey everyone looking for comments on my new demo reel... I still need to take some time to render better wireframes, and maybe some detail shots. Reluctant to call it finished yet... :D Heading back to the US in May looking for work.... Comments please :)

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03 March 2007, 02:31 AM
126 views and no replys.... hmmm not a good sign I think :shrug: , suggestions crits anyone?

03 March 2007, 09:17 AM
Hey man!

Really nice models! Good shading! I really liked the transformation from airplane towards this robot.

Well done! Keep up the good work.

04 April 2007, 02:26 AM
Thanks... thats my favorite on the reel... :) I am a bit of a Macross... or more specifically Robotech freak. I dig most giant robots actually. I have a feeling there could be some improvements, judging by the lack of responses... C'mon people dont be shy...

04 April 2007, 03:07 AM
Hello... anyone out there? :bounce:

04 April 2007, 08:44 PM
I feel it is generally a good reel, though by watching it I cannot gather a for sure focus on your part. The first part is lighting, then I feel like the rest is modeling, then some texturing and animation, etc.

I wonder did you do all the animation? Did you do all the rigging and the texturing? There is no credits page to say whether you did all of the work or not. Do you see what I mean?

I feel as all and all versions of the reel I watched it was generally dark and I could not see a lot of the assets well, except for the mobile assets section. Also your flashing of wireframe overall is short and hard to make out, possibly choose a different color?

Hope this helps!

04 April 2007, 04:28 AM
Yes, Thanks for the comments... It does help. Ya your right, I know I need to make the wireframes clearer... As for the content, all was done by me...Modeling, Texturing, shading , rigging, and animation... with the exception of the dancing animations at the end. Thanks again :) Curious tho' felt the first part was lighting? What do you mean?

04 April 2007, 05:35 AM
As most the content was done by you I would mention it at the end, and what wasnt give credit where credit is due, one can never assume you know?

I said the thing about lighting because the first model show the text says lighting.

Overall to like I mentioned before brighten up the parts of the reel that are darker, try to match the lighting of the mobile games sections of your reel. Its hard to see :).

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