I have been working a new bit of dialogue for my show reel. I feel the content is quite fitting as I am a graduate looking for that first job! I was quite happy with the piece when I finished the blocking, however now I am close to a more finished result i am not really pleased with it any more. I think i have spent too much time looking at it so would reallt appreciate some new perspectives on it. So any crits and advice would be great. I really want to improve so dont hold any punches!