View Full Version : Industrial city

02 February 2007, 09:06 PM
Heya friends!:)
Very much hope u like my last work!
Crit,comments please and thanks all!;) (

03 March 2007, 12:59 AM
Great colors and mood... reminds me a bit of Capetown seen from table mountain.
I like the choice of palette and composition.
The smoke to the right seems a bit pasted though (on it's contact point with the mountains)... the FG element feels a bit massive or lacking minute details in the highlight part.

Outside of that really great work !


03 March 2007, 01:29 AM

Looks nice, though a little unsure about the structure to the right. Maybe it would be better to remove that and have a tower or something a little further out and to the right, something with more defnition.

Keep it up :thumbsup:

03 March 2007, 06:08 AM
really nice irina, I like the sens of scale and detail in the far city, I would add some more detail to the right foreground element

CGTalk Moderation
03 March 2007, 06:08 AM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.