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02 February 2007, 08:59 AM
Hi Animators

This Thread will both contain 2D and 3D animations:eek:

I have decided to start a "fake" AM schooling which means that I'm going to "copy" the assignments and survive of what critique i can get :rolleyes:
Please critique my W.I.P:
One leg jump:

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02 February 2007, 10:32 PM
Update: (

-Re did the last part (But still not happy with it)
-Improved the first anticipation so it follows an arc
-Changed the timing a bit so that the anticipations and hang time works better

Does some one know why i get this green line in the right side?
It's compressed H.264 with QuicktimePro on windows!

Pleas help me if you know how to deal with it!

02 February 2007, 06:24 AM
hey man ur stuff is really lookin good, as you move into breakdowns make sure to work your timing and holds, arcs especially will become important in the next phase. you look like your developing a good sense of timing so just go with it.

keep going

03 March 2007, 10:24 PM
Sorry... I forgot everything about the thread here on CGTalk.

I made this blog for my project: (
That way it's a lot easier to update the forum threads!

What do you think about the last blocking pass?

03 March 2007, 08:36 PM
Update: (Blocking5)

Come on guys, tell me what you think:)

03 March 2007, 11:14 PM
And again:

It's mutch better right?

03 March 2007, 08:24 AM
Hey dude :)

just watched ur jumping lamp animation nice work really love it

03 March 2007, 08:54 AM
Hey dude :)

just watched ur jumping lamp animation nice work really love it

Thank you WyRd_Ralphie.
Glad you like it^^

03 March 2007, 10:58 AM
I really like it (blocking 6 on your blog!)

03 March 2007, 11:51 PM
What about this:

Thanks Erith

03 March 2007, 08:47 AM
good work
like the strech when itīs in the bounce and slide at the same time,,,
i would hold a couple of frames more in the air,,,just to try to look funnier...try out..

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