View Full Version : Character : outside "demoiselle"

02-21-2003, 04:08 PM
Well, first finished picture I post here. It still have some problems (big lips, big nose, etc...) but it's a done picture, which is hard to do for me :))
Thank you for your comments !
Max 5 - Amapi and thanks for for the background picture :thumbsup:

02-21-2003, 07:55 PM
Very nice head, it's alot better than what i could hope to do right now. Only crits I could offer are the lips don't look to be touching so that could be why they looka bit bigger than they are. The nostrils almost seem to blend in too well with the tip of the nose, just seems to me like there is no real definition in the nostrils themselves which makes the nose look rounder and slightly artificial. excellent model in my books :)

lil' rothko
02-21-2003, 09:41 PM
yup, lips and nose need attention, but apart from that its very nice. I hate lips and nostrils, why can't we all just have spheres for heads. Or teapots.


02-22-2003, 07:55 AM
Ya, I need to modify the nostrils I think, even if this is a finished picture... and I need to correct the transparency for the hairs which are up her left ear...

02-22-2003, 03:20 PM
the expression is very intense to me, hard to look at the picture for long. Maby try closing the eyes just a little bit more or do something with the mouth area.

The texture on the hat looks to be streching in places and the hair texture could be improved.

02-22-2003, 10:13 PM
she's staring me down! :eek:

02-23-2003, 10:37 AM
Well, I update it a little, I work on the nose and the eyes (and a little on the hairs, on the top of her left ear)
Thank you very much for your help : )
PS : I haded the wire ; )

02-23-2003, 10:41 AM
nice head!! like the others and yourself have already said, the nose/lips need a little more work... the new picture's better but still not perfect ;)....

02-23-2003, 10:51 AM
Well, humans are never perfect ; )
I know it may be better, but I have to do another model from the beginning to do better and better and better ; )
I also beginning a guy (I'll post it in the WIP section I think) and I have to finish the maps (I hate doing the maps ;)

02-23-2003, 10:54 AM
I don't like the lighting, it looks like it's flattening out the model a lot.

02-23-2003, 10:55 AM
Oups, I forgot the original version... sorry...
I think I prefere like that...

02-26-2003, 04:41 PM
asked by some, the Amapi v7 snapshot (Yes, it's an Amapi Designer 7 model ; )

02-26-2003, 05:47 PM
What is that on her head? I know it's a hat... but ???

02-26-2003, 05:53 PM
But what ? I don't understand :surprised

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