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03 March 2002, 09:38 PM
Hey there,

Could u people give me some critic on this pic?
Keep in mind i didn't spend hours on it. I sketched it then added some tone... i try to avoid it becoming a chore.

if u want u can find some more of my stuff @


Cephas [Pete]

03 March 2002, 01:33 AM
Interesting form. I looked at some of your other stuff. It's got that cool sort of hyper-stylized look to it. You'll make a great cartoonist someday. or are you already?

03 March 2002, 12:21 AM
Good work, but try to avoid the kind of mix that you have between the left knee and right leg, and try to show at least a bit of the left arm.... just giving a hint of it, with the shoulder ,may do.

Keep it up man

03 March 2002, 12:24 AM
Like it, but what are the bubbles at her mouth? Is she in water?

03 March 2002, 03:25 PM
thanks people,

Cockofthewok; no i'm not a big caroonist... student animator at this time.

Norante; thanks for the advice... yeah my uni teach would kill me over her silhouette. It just kinda started as a random doodle tho, but yeah the pose could have been stronger.

Korgath; yeah she's in water. I really didn't bother with giving any other indications tho. I didn't really think it really mattered.

Thanks again guys.

Pete <oops...> Cephas

03 March 2002, 06:03 AM
I agree with the above, a hint of a left arm would be a good thing. Also your leg volumes below the knee are a bit off. I know your going for perspective, but they arn't that far apart in space.
I like the feel of it though and I like the wash colors. Nice work.

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