View Full Version : Hunting(Oxota) Short film

09 September 2006, 11:38 AM
Hi all!!
This is my first completed short film for your consideration
this short take 2 month work - two guys
animated and directed by Samat Algozhin and Ramil Usmanov

follow this link please (14mb MPG file)
(and on this link you find more work, commercials and several shorts.when you have time):)

and this link:(7mb MOV)

so what you think?
please throw some critiques, comment when you have time
thank you all

09 September 2006, 12:29 AM
Great job man!

Great short, the animation was really smooth, and the short itself was very funny.
Keep up the great work, I'd love to see more :)

09 September 2006, 03:31 PM
I am surprised you haven't gotten a bigger response to this short. I think that everything works great visually. Story was great. Keep it up. Hope to see more of your shorts in the future. Take it easy.

09 September 2006, 03:46 PM
Wow! Very nicely done all around. You've achieved a big budget look with this short.

09 September 2006, 06:07 AM
Amazing work, especially for only 2 people and 2 months! Tha animation was smooth and lively. I also really liked the swooping camera movements when the hunters were walking through the grass. Great job.

09 September 2006, 09:27 AM
Thank you guys!!!
Im glad you like it

09 September 2006, 09:31 AM
lol that was very entertaining , thanx.

09 September 2006, 09:36 AM
well done guys! It was quite unexpected :)

09 September 2006, 10:32 AM
Cute;) Only thing I can think would have been if you'd zoomed in on the bear in the end or something.. *watches it again*

09 September 2006, 01:59 PM
I really like it!

Smooth and funny, just what i like to see in animation.

Keep up the great work!

09 September 2006, 09:46 PM
i loved the intro ..i think you did a great job....keep it up

09 September 2006, 11:19 PM
Good stuff man. I liked it a lot and the grass and weather were very cool elements...added a sense of a "touchable world" to be sure...But, the final camera move is a bit jarring. I think there should be a slow out and slow in or some more fluid movement instead of the linear feeling pan. Maybe the push is another option (offered by the forum leader) Additionally, I know that there is a certain stylistic quality about the animation but the bear is static at the end (save a few blinks). Adding a bit of "noise" to his still body might enhance the end a lot. Even just making a little circles with the COG would make it feel alive.

09 September 2006, 02:38 AM
Me likey :D

09 September 2006, 01:25 PM
Great work!
Nice timing and climax points during short!

good job!

09 September 2006, 11:35 PM
I really enjoyed it.. :thumbsup: thanks.. :D

09 September 2006, 07:32 AM
l liked the style :) but sort of work must be done on animation

09 September 2006, 08:55 AM
Hello all!!!
thanks for watching and thanks for comments
i just make some edits about the director of the film Ramil Usmanov
(it's property thing)
thanks again

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