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09 September 2006, 10:14 PM
so... here it is my animation on the august 10sec. soundfile.
it's a little adjusted from the one i've submitted on 10sec. but it still have no more than 4 days of work.. iknow it could of been better... but hope you like the's the first time i realy pay atention to it 'couse until now i studied the mechanics of the animation and just started studing acting for good. so it could be called my first animation.
i would be gladd to see your opinion about it :).
mutch feedback is wellcomed!

( ( & chaos.avi

4.5mb DivX

09 September 2006, 07:51 PM
once again...
thanks for your reply... :(

09 September 2006, 11:34 PM
I think its pretty good. The one thing that is throwing me off a little though, in the audio it sounds like he is talking to just one person but the characters eyes sort of switch between focusing on the camera and off camera as though there are two people he is speaking to.

I am not sure if you meant it to be that the camera is the perspective of another character or if the character he is speaking to is off camera. I think it might be better for him not to focus on the camera. It sort of breaks the mood for a character to acknowledge the camera in my opinion.

Great work though.

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