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07 July 2006, 01:39 AM
I'm trying the living city approach. I though that maybe a city could grow up around the discovery of a submerged UFO that may have crash landed. At first maybe the scientific community built a small station near the site and then a larger city grew up around that. I'd like to get crits on the basic idea and any composition problems there might be.
07 July 2006, 05:15 AM
wow:eek: ...that is awsome:applause: !!! Good luck too you!
07 July 2006, 12:39 PM
cool citydesign, kind of looks like a crashed spacehip:twisted:
07 July 2006, 03:51 PM
I like this concept alot. Looking forward to seeing more. ;)
07 July 2006, 08:15 PM
Thanks for the feedback! Here's another variation on the living city. This time it is more a straightforward city approach with one dominating structure.
Considering it is a matte painting is it ok to put in vehicles/ships?
07 July 2006, 09:11 PM
whaaaaaaaa! how did i miss this one , damn its looking hot , loving the sketch!
Good luck Sean :D
07 July 2006, 03:16 AM
Here's a more refined version of the same idea, I used max to play with the composition. This time I added the ruins of the old Atlantis on the left. Not sure if this is working yet, any crits or comments would be appreciated.
07 July 2006, 05:17 AM
I tried to combine the best of two different sketches. There is something about the first sketch I liked but I needed to darken it and make it look more underwater by adding more blue haze. I left out the ruins of the Old Atlantis this time. I think the giant leg was too prominent in the previous sketch. Also I've cropped the top of the main structure, I think it's better. Please feel free to comment.
07 July 2006, 06:19 AM
hey Sean, this is looking great! no crits from me , just keep it up! cant wait to see how you make everything look real!
07 July 2006, 12:01 PM
This is a great concept! Nothing to crit... I want to see the final ;)
07 July 2006, 05:44 PM
the second sketch definitly my favorite, it has a great sense of scale, that structure looks huge !! can wait to see a detailed mate painting , keep it up !
07 July 2006, 07:28 PM
i really like the dynamic in this ... can't wait to see the finished matte painting
07 July 2006, 03:31 AM
Thanks for those comments. Here's a test of the foreground element using a combination of 3d plants and painted plants.
07 July 2006, 02:29 AM
Here's an update. http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8348/newatlantis05ol0.jpg
07 July 2006, 02:31 AM
Here's another variation with more blue and now Atlantis is more subtle. I will probably end up splitting the difference between this and the last pic.
07 July 2006, 08:55 AM
you're adding great details,keep up:thumbsup:
07 July 2006, 08:17 PM
Thanks Valerion! I'm still trying to figure out the content of the composition. I feel like I can achieve better realism at this point with photographic elements. I've gone back to the idea of showing the old Atlantis in the foreground.
07 July 2006, 08:54 PM
thats cool man, cant wait for those details :thumbsup:
07 July 2006, 01:26 PM
Wow, that concept rocks!!! Kinda sci-fi city!
07 July 2006, 05:46 PM
sean this is looking great ! the sense of scale is awesome, even tough I think you have your foreground and background too strong, I mean I think you need some middel ground elements , this is just my opinion, good luck ! this is going to be a great image
07 July 2006, 10:41 AM
jamesvfx:thanks Jamesvfx. Yeah I agree about the lack of middleground. I decided to push forward anyway. I may be able to get something going in the middleground at the last minute.
MPavel:thanks, yeah it's more like "New Atlantis".
So here's the latest, just mixed a bunch of cities together. I may try to alter the buildings some more to make the shapes more unusual. I nixed the old ruins for now.
07 July 2006, 07:06 PM
wow, thats awesome
07 July 2006, 12:27 AM
Hats off to you Sean , this is turning out to be a great matte. The city looks sweet and so does the rest! Keep it up Sean , I am looking forward to the final.
07 July 2006, 04:22 AM
sean this is looking really awesome, just one tip for you, try to achieve a scpecific camera exposure for this, I mean maybe the black levels in the foreground should be way darker than the ones you have already , think a little bit like a cinematographer how would a real camera react to that light
07 July 2006, 05:23 AM
Thanks miguelslo,Matellis and jamesvfx.
So jamesvfx, I think I know what you mean. Do you mean just make the foreground darker overall ?
Anyway, here is an attempt to integrate the old ruins. I kind of like the idea that in the future pipe/cables were laid down right on top of an archaeologoic site as maybe that is more in keeping with the myth of Atlantis i.e the idea that the people were corrupt.
Any crits or comments welcome.
07 July 2006, 06:19 PM
IŽd love to visit this city haha.Maybe IŽd add some lights on the ruins of the left and these red lights IŽd make smaller cause I think it makes the composition looks small,or increase the depth between the foreground and background:) Good luck to you!!
07 July 2006, 10:01 AM
The lack of middleground ultimately was a problem I think so I've tried to give it more depth here. The composition looked unbalanced so I skewed the view. I've also tried to make the foregeound darker. I've added some bubbles and plankton type stuff. There would be allot of debris in the water.
07 July 2006, 10:15 AM
Sean! your the man! awesome stufff , love the improvements. Keep it up :D
07 July 2006, 11:29 AM
one thing that bothers abit , the little red dots on the buildings, other then that great forced perspective, and good luck to you dude!:buttrock:
07 July 2006, 12:33 PM
yes your new design is better.Now it looks amazing! lighting is great:thumbsup:
07 July 2006, 03:23 AM
Thanks Matellis,Velarion and SamsonsReaper.
Yeah I think I'll take out the red dots.
I don't think I will have much time between now and thursday but if anybody has any tips on any final touches I would love to hear.
08 August 2006, 05:59 AM
I think this is pretty much final for me.
Thanks for all the help and encouragement.
08 August 2006, 08:12 AM
nice depth on the alien ship and good use of haze. You have a strong entry. Good Luck!!!
08 August 2006, 01:30 PM
I think youŽve improved your composition so much:thumbsup: I like the shape of these buildings. I wish you good luck to the challenge!!:thumbsup:
08 August 2006, 08:24 PM
thanks vshen and GonzaloGolpe. Does anybody know where I can find info about how to submit the final hi res image i.e. what format etc.. I tried attaching a .tif but the file size is too big.
08 August 2006, 10:43 PM
jpg is enough, dude ...
You've got a great image there. The buildings look a little bit like toys, but the perspective is cool. good luck
08 August 2006, 10:43 PM
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