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madeofpoly
07 July 2006, 11:22 AM
Hello everyone

I would really appreciate some help with this piece. I already made some changes based on some critiques and it improved a little, I am looking for honest critiques, so please be brutal!! :) , i don't mind changing whatever it is that is not working.Would love to hear some fresh ideas.

http://www.madeofpoly.com/cholesterol03.mov

Thanks

madeofpoly
07 July 2006, 04:59 PM
Another version with some fixes...is it that bad no one cares to waiste time with it! HA

http://www.madeofpoly.com/cholesterol04.mov

naotem

Junerahe
07 July 2006, 05:07 PM
its really cool.. cant wait to see it completed

although i have to admit that i feel his dissapointment should come earlier.. you could play with levels of dissapointment from the moment teh meal is revealed to his his mothers response

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