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05 May 2006, 09:18 PM goes, I really haven't done this before here...I don't really know if it works it is, the WIP. Working on the hands next, hope it look better. Any critique ia appreciated. Thanks.

05 May 2006, 09:50 AM
I love it!

Something is off on her face, maybe its the eyes. They just don't seem aligned correctly to me.
I think there are some anatomy problems. The torso/chest/back area is just waaaay to long for me. And it makes her booty non-existant... (or maybe i'm just a booty kind of guy)

legs too short? arms too long?

would love to see it finished

05 May 2006, 02:40 AM
its the proportions all right that are catching you , also the way youwork the hips is rather flat since they can dump as it were to one side and the shoulders tilt in the other direction. also the twist on the head is a bit to much perhaps, the head should be lower down

take some time out and attend some life drawing , it helps a lot also to have a good anatomy book

j mac

05 May 2006, 03:21 PM
Thank you for the advice :) I fixed the anatomy and the face angle. Will work on it more. Thanks again. Um...she's Asian now because I had to model for this. EEK!!

05 May 2006, 03:06 PM

05 May 2006, 04:04 PM
I think this is a huge improvement over the first image, well done :) Looking forward to more updates :)

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