View Full Version : A lazy man with his alarm

05 May 2006, 04:48 PM
this is my first time to post something of mine here...

it's a story of an alarm suicided because of it could not wake man up...
hope everoyone will like it...

here has some pics of the animation

it's the url:
name:A lazy man with his alarm (
made by:tronic.vaio []

05 May 2006, 11:58 AM
hey there,

u say this is your first post but is that your first 3D animation???

im only a rookie myself and that reminds me heaps of the first piece i created. i was so proud of it and still am seeing as how much i learnt in such a short time.

now im onto my 3rd piece and already im seeing a huge HUGE improvement in not on ly my animating, but modelling, texturing, lighting and rendering.... everything!

for a bit of critique on ur work, id say some parts really stood out like when the clock scrunches up in anger....that was cool.... but then other parts let the animation down, like when the clocked dropped into the bin.... it was too linear .... action but not acting... this will come with experience though and i say for what may be your first animating effort.... good job

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