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04 April 2006, 12:02 PM
Thanks for the tips.

04 April 2006, 02:28 PM
Very nice for you first finished painting!

Her nose looks like it has been drawn in profile, you should probably see some of the right nostril from that angle. Her mouth is placed a bit low on the head and im liking the green eyes but maybe it will look better if you darken them a bit. Also, her jawline is extremly straight, make it rounder.

Her hair looks pretty good but I think you should detail it a bit more.
The values on her finger (the one resting on her chin) blends in with the values on her chin making her finger look extremly long, I think you can fix this by adding a shadow there.

Especially her face looks a bit flat and very bright, have you been using a photo as reference? Thats good but the flash makes the images flat.
Not really sure whats going on with the water.

Keep it up!

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