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adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:01 AM
Hi im doing a cyberpunk scene with a detectiv hos out lookin for some cyberscum!

tell me watt you think please!

Thank you

djtrousdale
04 April 2006, 12:51 AM
His pose is perfect, I can sense the movement.
Keep working on it! :thumbsup:

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:57 AM
Her is one more in the cyberpunk theme
Its just a sketch i did today at a cafe and then painted on in black and white in photoshop

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 07:43 PM
Its a troll !! please tell me wath you think abot the pose and coloring?
thanks

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:57 AM
Its the cyberpuntroll!!

I belive im almost finised, Please crits on fluid and detail, im pleased but i would like to hear suggestions of improvments for a more real feeling!

Thanks for your time!

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:32 AM
more defined!

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 03:17 AM
The same some changes

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 03:28 AM
Love th e surfer dude, I think the troll is a bit too uh... gross lol. But I guess it wouldn't be as gross if you layed off the slimy look perhaps. Then it's just be... :surprised freaky.

As far as the last update, I'd say give him some action have him chasing a cyberjunkie struggling over some garbage cans... sommin like that at least heh :) .

Keep it up.

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 04:45 PM
I tjought about wath you said but he is alredy at the end of the screen. so if he is chasing sombodey he woud not be visable in the image but i did some changes to get the feeling that something is happening

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 10:40 PM
More work done more lines and details.
Please crit on perspective and color.

Simon
04 April 2006, 11:07 PM
Cool piece.

With the heavier lines I think the strokes might need to be cleaner.. or sharper, they seem to draw the focus of the image at the moment.

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 11:26 PM
I now, its a daunting task when you dont have a tablet.
I think it will be esier then.
Good point anyway

Simon
04 April 2006, 11:30 PM
Thats with a mouse? Ouch!

Kudos! :thumbsup:

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 11:33 PM
I had no choice im kind of broke at the moment!

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 11:33 PM
its not very good for the hand ithink

Runecaster
04 April 2006, 12:50 AM
I like this scene - I am brand new to all of this, but to me the perspective looks pretty good, I don't sense any glaring mistakes anyway. The colors might be a little stark, but that might be intentional, so that's ok. Can't wait to see more refining - and :eek: that you are doing this with a mouse!

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:50 AM
Here comes a bit more refining

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:53 AM
Well i dont know wich of the two latest posts look best.

Any ideas?

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:55 AM
Thank u by the way.

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 01:55 AM
Yeah it's a lot more interesting right away, nice work. I think the pool of blood is over the top though. Might wanna change that into smudges of blood.

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:57 AM
Yes u are right about the blood

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 01:59 AM
btw, you could also consider using a free imagehost, your attachment space might run out soon, if there's still alimit that is. They've taking leaps and bounds regarding services here on cgtalk!

try www.photobucket.com or imageshack.us, imageshack allows you to post thumbnails but I'm personally more fond of embedded images, because you can see straight away what the deal is. :)

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:10 AM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunksunsett3.jpg
He thanks alot, this feels much better.
How do i resize the image proportionaly.

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 02:11 AM
WHat do you mean by proportionally? :) Your welcome btw...

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:14 AM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/cyberpunk_troll4copy.jpg
Maybe this is to big?

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:17 AM
So you dont have to guess when you drag it down, so it doesent get to wide or to thin or squashed.

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:18 AM
its not a problem because i thougt tou had to fit the image in that squre where you post.

My english may be confusing sorry

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 08:03 AM
I'm sorry was painting my QUeen of beasts, completely lost touch of the world.

In photoshop there's a ticker box, where you specify 'keep aspect ratio'... but I think the guideline is about 700 pixels wide giver or take. I'm not sure how high though, but I go with about 1000 pixels max. Which is a bit high I think.

Btw, are you using a mouse? the lines seempretty hard curved, very sharp angles.

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:11 PM
Yes i use a mouse, thanks

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:43 AM
Hi ive been working on a, Its just a sketch at the moment tell me watt you thinkhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/guycopy.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:25 AM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/cyberpunknew_new.jpgHere is a new pic im working on, Its still early but comments about composition is very welcome

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:21 AM
More guy with tubes, pretty happie with compositionhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/guy2copy.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:22 AM
Still a sketch though

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 08:46 PM
More of im getting tired of writing cyberpunk..

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 09:14 PM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/cyberpunknewcopy.jpgheres the image

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 11:22 PM
herse progress on my first cyberpunk scene, id like some critts or comments please!http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_merklar.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:19 AM
Here is an update ..pleeeas any crits comments from you pros out there is very appriciatedhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/guy3copy.jpg

audit
04 April 2006, 10:09 AM
not a pro, but hey...the face is looking good. It would be good to see you get a lighting scheme set up - it looks quite flat and 'universally' lit at the moment. I think the face is pretty well constructed anatomically - I believe once you have some dynamic lighting you can afford to bring out the structure much more, with deeper shadows and brighter highs. Plus, I'd love to see some context! Looks like he is surrounded by pillows at the moment :D keep up the good work.
-audit

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:26 PM
He is sunken down in pillows

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 07:23 PM
Thanks for your advice by the way

audit
04 April 2006, 09:57 PM
no problem...post some updates soon!

-a

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:55 AM
He is now rozen in ice ...
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/guy5.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 01:54 AM
Heres the cyberpunk scene again dont understand i gets too snall?

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:02 AM
one more tryhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_dark.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:05 AM
IL try make it bigger.http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/baberiba.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:15 AM
comments and critt about manely the face, light and shadow

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 07:23 PM
i have a tablet now a lot more fun!!http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/gubbe_tablet.jpg

jmBoekestein
04 April 2006, 07:38 PM
Was about time man!!! Very much an improvement, looks like you got a good grip on the anatomy too. I'd change the surface contrast and texture of the fluid if it were me. Add higher contrast and alot more trasnparency.

Looks like a big jump, I wonder what you;ll come up with next.

:thumbsup:

Maybe now you can properly help out on anatomy... :p

audit
04 April 2006, 12:35 AM
nice going adrianospm! I like the way you've set up the lighting. My advice would be...push it further!! This piece would be really great (and creepy) with some dramatic lighting. I could see the piece going to almost black in the liquid, with specular highlights and secondary lights to bring out the features of the man's face. That depends on what mood you want for the thing of course. Now you have some good values down,I would also ask what look are you going for? If you want a rough, gritty atmosphere go for some aggressive textures and strokes, or you could break out the blending brushes and go for a smoother (more realistic but less expresssionistic) effect. Just some ideas. Keep it up!

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 12:44 AM
thanks for the advice, i think the dark liquid thing sounds great.
heres an uppdated reworked cyberpunk cityhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_.jpg

adrianospm
04 April 2006, 02:08 AM
sorry about the bad anatomy lessons, i could see it and not explain it and with a mouse not draw it either

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 05:35 PM
ive done some morehttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk3copy.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 06:23 PM
here is a sci fi hallway, need crits on how tomake interesting scenarios.http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/sci-fi_mindre3.jpg

aldog
05 May 2006, 06:30 PM
this is looking pretty dang good so far, one thing though, maybe the stop sign should be red. or if it's not supposed to be on, maybe the letters should be black

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 07:11 PM
thanks, good point!

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 08:16 PM
here is the changeshttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk3copyxcvb.jpg

Runecaster
05 May 2006, 09:25 PM
I like it so far a big :thumbsup:!

What are you going to do with the ground/wall under/next to the guy? What color were you looking at? I would love to see you push the details of this piece even further, it's got a great feel to it.

jmBoekestein
05 May 2006, 09:41 PM
Hey don't worry about it. Better than no help at all. :D Making good progress I see, have you tried to blend out things more smoohtly? It might help you establish more depth in your scene. It requires more work though, and maybe you're waiting untill a later stage.

Keep going! :thumbsup:

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 12:38 AM
Thanks for the comments, i have a tendency to get stuck when i get to this stage in the picture. I want it to flow fast but its hard when your dealing with fine detaile but i guess youre right both of you il finish this one!!!

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 12:44 AM
im just improvising with the textures and detail the whole pic frankly is rather improvised i dont have any fixed idea about how it should turn out. Im trying different colors and the ones i feel fit together and so on. I do think about warm and cold colors and opposits but sometimes its just confusing hope this makes sense?

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 01:11 AM
jm totaly see your point about the blending i havent looked at it for a few houres and when i saw it now it all made sense thanks!

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 11:47 PM
her is a sketch ofa devil kind of character, i havent used any reference for the body, it is kind of a difficult pose to draw any suggestions?http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/devilcopy.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 12:12 AM
a little more donehttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_morethings_small.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 01:29 AM
here is another uppdate, tell me watt you tjinkhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_morethings_small2.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 12:53 PM
here is more uppdatedhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/Cyberpunk_morethings_sgcfhfh.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 04:57 PM
i think its better nowhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/cartoondevil.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 10:51 PM
Here is a pic for that competition a journey begins ive started onhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/journy_small3copy.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 11:20 PM
Would be nice with some commentshttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/moredetails.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 12:19 AM
here is my journy pic again for the contest, no ones sayin anything about it in the competion forumhttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/journy_small5.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 01:16 PM
here is some progresshttp://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/journy_small6.jpg

adrianospm
05 May 2006, 11:28 PM
please i need some iádvice or oppinon no one has said anything about it in the competition forum is it that bad?http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/adrianospm/journy_small8.jpg

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