View Full Version : The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: peter williams

04 April 2006, 06:19 PM
peter williams is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (

Latest Update: Shading (Textured and lit): lighting (

04 April 2006, 08:14 PM (

The path of a warrior

04 April 2006, 08:38 PM (

I love modeling trees because three is so much freedom in creating them

04 April 2006, 08:41 PM (

My character is inspired my the last samurai

04 April 2006, 08:43 PM (


04 April 2006, 03:31 PM (

I started a hors but Iím not sure if it essential

04 April 2006, 03:33 PM (

More of the jungle

04 April 2006, 03:36 PM (

My character

04 April 2006, 03:13 PM (

I still need to transport my character in the scene.
Working on my final demo so I don't have much time to improve my challenge

04 April 2006, 04:12 PM
Good going

+ Great depth of field: I really like the light coming from between the leaves.

+ Great detail on the plants: thatís REALLY bringing this project to life (that and the textures.)

+ Lighting: Nice going

+ Good composition: it keeps my eye directed to the middle of the page.

+ Meticulous craftsmanship: no shortcuts for you I can see. This project certainly turned my head.

My advice

-Is your warrior going to have an expression? I think that is very much an important part of this project. While stoic characters going on epic journeys isnít too uncommon, it is very common in this contest. You put a lot of work into this, however, I believe that it will blend in with quite a few others. Make the judges notice your work, and all of the meticulous work you put into it will pay off.

-Color composition: I would advise putting your warrior in something to draw him out. Tones of red or blue will do that for you.

This is a VERY good job on this by the way. I could totally see this on the cover to a big video game title.

05 May 2006, 05:37 AM
Hi ! Your work is execellant.Texuring is to good,which software u have used???

Keep it up.

05 May 2006, 10:55 AM
The visible light beams add a very strong atmo here. If I were you, I`d use stronger contratst between light and places in shadow. It would look even more impressive. I always put extreme contrasts in my works and then have crazy troubles:banghead::cool:

Cheers, and good luck with remaining elements :beer:

05 May 2006, 08:57 PM
Your trees and foilage look excellent. Great job. :thumbsup:

Now all you need is some shrubbery. Maybe one shrub that can be placed next to the tree to the left. If you don't, I shall say "Ni!" lol.....( old monty python, search for the holy grail )

05 May 2006, 05:02 PM (

All of the jungle and the cathedral in Maya

05 May 2006, 05:30 PM (


05 May 2006, 05:34 PM (

the key light

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